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The First Vampire
Author: Carrot On Weighing Scale
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Afraid of the light, addicted to blood, and immortal… When Ke Lin transmigrated to this world, he realized that he seemed to fit all the characteristics of vampires. But the problem is, he couldn’t find any records about vampires in this world! Could it be that he is the first-ever vampire in this world? He had no predecessors to guide him. And there was no system to help him. In order to understand the powers and limitations of vampires in this world, Ke Lin had no choice but conduct experiments on himself and observe the reactions of his body: [Under direct sunlight, power levels decreased by 30%] [Throat, heart, and brain are no longer fatal weaknesses] [Ordinary foods will no longer satiate hunger, only blood can restore stamina] [Holy water… wait what? Who fed me holy water!!!

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After Transmigrating, the Fat Wife Made a Comeback!

Qiao Mei transmigrated into a novel as a supporting character with the same name as her who lacked presence. This supporting character was a country bumpkin who couldn’t get married due to her obesity. According to the original script, this country girl Qiao Mei was a fatty spoiled by her grandfather. However, their relatives were all vicious and cruel people. Her grandfather had poor health, so once he died, the relatives would divide and swallow up his assets. Hence, her grandfather’s greatest wish was to marry Qiao Mei off. For this, even sacrificed and betrayed his good friend’s grandson, Xia Zhe. Grandpa got Xia Zhe drunk and had Qiao Mei forcibly take the strong and handsome Xia Zhe with her body which weighed more than two hundred pounds. Then, grandpa would catch them the next day and force Xia Zhe to marry Qiao Mei. However, that eventually caused the start of Qiao Mei’s unfortunate life. Also, in the original story, Qiao Mei took possession of Xia Zhe’s mysterious jade. But due to Qiao Mei’s stupidity, her cousin's sister had tricked Qiao Mei into giving her the jade, which resulted in the cousin’s family becoming rich. When Qiao Mei transmigrated here, it was during the awkward moment when she was making love to the man after making him drunk. She woke up groggily the next day and grandpa’s team had already appeared at the door. Qiao Mei was frightened. She didn’t want to proceed on the original path and marry a man who didn’t love her. And so, she lied and chased grandpa away. She also pushed the man out before forcing herself to look at her tanned and chubby reflection in the mirror! Alas, she cried at her ugly appearance… Like a sumo wrestler in large cloth underwear, even the plus-sized apparel shops didn’t have clothes in her size. And her face was the size of a pizza, a scorched pizza! Qiao Mei decided to reform her life! The first step, lose weight! The second step, clean up her room! She used to be particular about cleanliness, and although her current house had a huge courtyard, she could only describe it as messy! The third step was to hold onto the jade tightly so her greedy cousin wouldn’t stand a chance! Only, wasn’t the tall and handsome Xia Zhe supposed to hate her according to the original story? Why was he being nicer and nicer to her?

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2025-03-10 00:08
If you wanted to draft a novel, you had to first determine the theme and plot of the novel, and then choose a suitable drawing platform. On the platform, one could choose a drawing tool to create illustrations for the novel and add text and background descriptions. You can also set the drawing parameters such as text color, background color, font size, etc. to make the novel illustrations more realistic. Finally, he would save the novel's illustrations and publish them.
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The following steps were usually required for a novel draft: 1. Decide on the subject and theme: Choose a novel that suits your story and specify the theme you want to tell. This would help maintain the direction of the writing process. 2. Preparing an outline: It is very important to prepare a detailed outline before you start writing. The outline could help determine the structure and plot of the story and the development of the characters. 3. Create a draft: After the outline is confirmed, you can start creating a draft. This helped to determine the core and theme of the story and determine the character and image of the character. 4. Revise the draft: After the draft is completed, it needs to be revised and edited. This helped to find and correct errors and flaws in the story and ensure the logic and cohesiveness of the story. Final draft: After the revision and editing, the final version can be finalized. When the final draft was finalized, one needed to pay attention to details such as paper size, font, and typography to ensure the quality of the work. 6. Promotion and publicity: After completing the work, you need to actively promote and promote it. Through social media, online forums, and other means, more people could understand the work and attract readers 'interest. These were the basic steps for a novel. Of course, the specific writing process needed to be adjusted according to different authors and works.
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A draft novel is basically an initial version of a story. It's often rough and might have plot holes, inconsistent characters, or grammar mistakes.
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The first draft is often more of a rough outline of the story. It might have plot holes, underdeveloped characters, and basic writing. The second draft, on the other hand, starts to refine things. Characters become more complex and believable. Plot holes are filled, and the overall writing quality improves. For example, in my first draft, I just got the basic story down, but in the second draft, I added details to the main character's backstory to make their actions more understandable.
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