cinder x ruby fanfic

My story revolves around Cinder navigating his new life and soon new world. The first volume is mainly about when and how Cinder came to be what he is; vol 2 will be when the real fun begins. I will answer any questions you want about my novel in due time.

this is a pretty nice story so far. i like the Background and worldbuilding you did so far with Cinder and all the characters feel pretty good. Cinder portrayal matches up with the canon character really well, how she wants to hurt Yang in arguments etc and her general demeanor. that part fits well with an immature Cinder that didnt fully convert to the dark side yet. Now we need the healing part where the rough edges of her darker parts get sanded down, but we get to that :D there is enough room for potential character development that makes it fun to read this story.

Kalau mau jujur semua mereka beesalah ama ruby mereka semua menyakiti dan menyiksa ruby tak terkecuali martin justru dia lah paling utama yang membuat ruby menderita

Continue,só que e Violet, Sasha e Ruby? Vamos, pero ¿qué pasa con Violet, Sasha y Ruby? 続きますが、ヴァイオレット、サーシャ、ルビーはどうですか？ Go on, but what about Violet, Sasha and Ruby?

You only see few RUBY novel now day, so you better not drop it. The era of RUBY fan fiction novel is over, only a few pieces of it remain and you young man carry the will of RUBY. LOL