dialogue in fiction

Mindless Madness

NKGreyInk

2023-04-10

Very well developed idea, with pretty believable dialogue, the only issue is on some of the tenses, but other than that it's a fabulous piece of developing fiction.

Curiosity Killed The Cat

Meri_F · Horror

8 Chs

Brass_Badger

2021-08-04

A great paranormal mystery story from a burgeoning writer! While the writer is new to fiction, there's some great lines of dialogue and some well-built characters. This is definitely a story to look out for!

The Devil Under The Name Of God

1AM · Fantasy

97 Chs

MokouFriedChicken

2020-04-18

TL:DR A well written story, this one. Would recommend for those that fancy the genre. Grammar has little to no errors. Prose is natural, as well as the dialogue. Quite frankly, a high quality piece of fiction. Keep on writing 👍

Mr. Moon Rabbit, I'm Not Yours!

RachelRuth · Fantasy

190 Chs

kilopi505

2020-11-27

This piece of fiction has fight scenes that are well described, dialogue that is...well, at the least on the level of a PG rated action movie from the late half of the twentieth century, and the setting... If you are a fan of Fallout, you might like this story.

Black Market Merchant

KyleSullivanJr · Sci-fi

268 Chs

The reborn demon king is a bit cute

This book was also known as [The Daily Life of the White Tiger and the Wolf Cub],[The Reborn Milk Bun Demon Lord's Wife Chasing Story],[The White Emperor's Milk Bun Little Fudge], and [The Reborn Wife Why Is She Ignoring Me]. Before rebirth: Xuan Hao,"Master, can't you be more obedient?" Every time you come to ruin my plans Bai Xijing: Who is more obedient? How many more people do you want to kill? Can't you be a little more obedient? Xuan Hao: Shizun, you are not obedient After rebirth: Xuan Hao: Master, look, I didn't kill him. I even saved him. Bai Xijing: Yes "Master, is there anything else?" My wife is ignoring me every day. Am I not cute enough as a milk bun? Doesn't Master want to pinch it? Before rebirth: Xuan Hao: Master? What are you doing here again? You haven't even recovered from your injuries, and you're here to cause trouble for me again? Bai Xijing: Come back with me Xuan Hao: Go back? How to return? That works too! Then it depends on Master's sincerity. After rebirth: "Master, where is this?" I'm so scared, come and save me, I want to go home Bai Xijing: Aren't you a demon too? Xuan Hao: But I was brought up by an immortal (crying) A Demon Master is actually afraid of a low-level little demon. Do you think I believe it? The high and mighty Great Demon Lord Xuan Hao vs. the spotless White Emperor Bai Xijing, who was cold on the outside but warm on the inside 1v1, sweet pet, the plot is sadistic, he (with a sickly tender preference, milk bun sweet love, strong love) two-way secret love, two-way rush

Snow Snow Lotus

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The youngest daughter of a farmer is happy to be the head of the family

As a rice worm of the 21st century, she had transmigrated to a small peasant girl of the Yuexi Dynasty because of a heroic act. Her parents had died early, and there were only four siblings in the family who depended on each other. The family was poor, and there was not even half an acre of land. Life was difficult. Watch as she opened the heaven-defying space and led her relatives and friends to a well-off life...

Leisure clouds are beneficial to people

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[Quick Wear: Green Tea Villain, His Sweetness is off the charts]

[1v1 Shuang Jie][No romantic romantic partner][I don't know what character she has, but she's a little straight (Female Lead) x Gentleman Tea Spirit's Grievance (Male Lead)] After she was cheated on, her parents threw her into a thousand worlds in order to let her relax. They called her a tourist. She had no impression or feelings for her ex-husband, but she met a super narcissistic man in the small world who insisted on pursuing her. Seeing that his face was indeed very attractive, she was deceived just like that. Who knew that a long time later, she suddenly remembered that this narcissistic man who would chase after her no matter where she went turned out to be her ex-husband! #Help! What if my ex-husband can't forget me after we break up? Waiting online, urgent! -- "Ah Yu, look at me, okay…" The repeater looked at her with grievance. "Ah Yu…Ah Yu, wait for me…" He was chasing after a certain someone who was riding a flying sword with a basket of flowers in his hand. The paparazzi, who loved to study the gossip of celebrities, chased after the beautiful manager."Ah Yu, don't run. Give me a chance, please…" -- * Into the pit! I won't let you down! [Demining: The male protagonist will not appear in all planes!] "It's more of a plot. Okay, it could also be a sweet love story. I don't know. It's written wherever it is. Let's see?" It wasn't a loss to invest!

Qi Yin Tomb

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One Punch Lu Mingfei: " Out of interest, Dragon King, retreat."

Fake Lu Mingfei thought,'I'm a person who occasionally goes crazy! The real Lu Mingfei, I'm just a hero who's out of interest. Fake Lu Mingfei: Lu Mingze, I want to exchange a quarter of my health! The real Lu Mingfei thought,'I've become stronger, and I've become bald. I can deal with the Dragon King with one punch. If one punch isn't enough, I'll give you two!'

Nagano slowly

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I, Inuyasha!

He had transmigrated into Inuyasha, but he didn't have broken teeth. The half-demon decided to hide in this city and grow up peacefully. How did he become the city lord? Since I can't become a great demon myself, I'll make this city a great demon! But when he woke up, who were all of you? The one who was in love with a demon…Great General Yue Huangquan? Isn't Divine Spring Cloud Horizon just a minor character in the original work? Why are there so many scenes? Oh, and you, Kikyo…When did you kill Ming Dao?

Jueji

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