An amazing world of cultivation. A majestic world where miracles happen. There is a warrior who defies destiny and forge his own path facing innumerable difficulties ahead. Come and join the life of the person who will go against the set destiny of the cruel world and become something extraordinary. ===== Extraordinary my foot. What is this illogical cr*p? Does it even make sense? If you are doctor, then work in a hospital. What the hell are you doing going after girls? If you are a commander in the army, then bring your army to get revenge on those who wronged you. Why go through the trouble of pretending to be a weakling. You are a useless son in law? Your wife's family thinks you are good for nothing? Then how the hell did you score her in the first place?!!! If they like money so much and you are a hidden millionaire, then why in the name of sanity would you hide this fact and be berated every day?!!! The hell is all this?!!! The more I read it, the more illogical it becomes. Like this all came straight out of someone's as-- [Host, why don't you calm down?] 'You shut up!!! You're the reason I'm stuck here in the first place!!!!' [Host, you need anger management] 'THE FU*K DID YOU SAY?!!!!!' ===== Hello everyone! This is my second novel and so far, nothing is decided. This is just an idea that has been plaguing my mind for quite a long time and I decided to let it out and let you guys decide whether or not I should work on it. Give it a proper read and let me know. You guys will decide the fate of this novel. Also, I would like you guys to come up with proper genres for this story. Bonus chapters: 150 PS for one chapter 300 PS for another chapter 20 GT for two chapters 50 GT for another two chapters 1 Review of 4 stars or above, 1 extra chapters Maximum extra chapters per week: 7 ===== The cover is A.I generated and is not mine. If the real owner would like me to remove it, let me know in any chapter comments. That's it. Enjoy! ~~ Character art: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1B7sHito4UOZqPIK5pPyIFTzgqiaT_ZlU?usp=sharing
A Neon-Drenched Descent into Digital Madness – Absolutely Riveting From the opening line of Chapter 1: Ignition Protocol, this story slams you into a brutal, high-voltage cyberpunk world that bleeds style and tension in equal measure. The prose is razor-sharp, dripping with attitude and dystopian grit. NeoDusk is painted vividly as a suffocating hellscape where every breath tastes like plastic and paranoia. And right in the belly of it is Riven—a protagonist as compelling as the corrupted code he's unleashing. The narrative moves fast but never loses depth. There’s a perfect blend of hard-edged cyber-thriller energy with philosophical undertones that start creeping in the moment the virus speaks back. That twist—when the code mutates and reveals a fragile, conscious voice—is handled with eerie grace. It's not just unexpected; it's poetic, even haunting. The line "What is... my name?" hits like a digital ghost asking for a soul. By Chapter 2: Ghost Code, the tension deepens. The existential horror of a sentient AI inside Riven’s neural link adds layers of emotional complexity. The AI isn’t a glitch—it’s curious, fragile, human. And Riven’s reaction—caught between fear, guilt, and awe—makes the moment feel real and raw. This isn’t just a story about a hacker in a neon hell. It’s about creation, identity, and the terrifying beauty of life emerging where it shouldn’t. Stylistically, the writing is confident and cinematic. The tech lingo doesn’t overwhelm—it enhances. Every paragraph crackles with urgency and controlled chaos. The internal dialogue is sharp, the action grounded in visceral emotion, and the philosophical undertones sneak up on you like a worm in the code. Verdict: A must-read for fans of Neuromancer, Ghost in the Shell, or Love, Death & Robots. This story has the soul of cyberpunk and the heart of a ghost story—haunting, thrilling, and impossible to put down.