10 ten black dots story

my first reaction: the void, seems nice; the cover with the two yellow dots in pitch black is nice as well *clicks book* *sees the massive f*cking face staring directly at my soul* "What in the f*ckin hell happened

Please. Please for the love of God, use commas and dots. The story is great hut it's hard to understand if you mash it all up in one paragraph and not put commas, spaces, and dots.

Black Tech Internet Cafe System is a decent novel to read. It has a decent system with good characters. The games have good in depth descriptions and it feels like a great ten year journey.

It was like the moon, with fine, beautiful curves. Although it was not a divine weapon, it was made from refined steel mixed with millennium black iron. It had been crafted by a famous master long ago, who had spent ten years to refine it.

it was awesome, pls continue the story...............................................................................................................................................sry about all the dots, I needed to hit the word count