rwby faunus cum womb fanfic

5 star because anything less gets removed. This is a fanfic where MC is so dumb (not using power she has, because of fear of losing control of it) then she gets mutilated, her womb gets ****ed up and she can't have babies anymore. The title suits this fanfic 100%. Everything is about Naruto. MC will get raped/****ed/used as a cum dumpster/please 3 universes with her spread out womb as long as naruto is happy. Author is disgusting. And hi author, i know you will delete this review as you did will all the other negative ones. but **** you.

Well, this novel can't be called bad but it definitely cannot be called good. A bit below average in my opinion. I'm not talking about the quality of plot or character design blah blah blah. No, I'm talking about the fact that the writing is done in stage dialogue. It breaks the immersion and makes you really upset and irritated. Not much can be said about the stability of updates either. I also didn't like the fact that the mc can switch between faunus and human form freely. I'd rather have him as fully human or faunus(in this case, faunus would be better cuz the author wanted to give a bloodline to the mc). This is because while it's cool to switch between human and faunus, it wouldn't work in RWBY and would just make more complications. Also, the descriptions, while good, can be improved. For example; [Ancient Wolf : The first wolf that existed. Stronger than normal wolves but have less control] can be changed to something like [Primordial Wolf: The wolf that has existed from the beginning. They are have powerful abilities and are almost unmatched in their era. However, they tend to have less control over their formidable powers.] See? Don't make it too blunt unless you plan to write a lot of infodumps. I do appreciate the fact that the author filled in the background for new readers who are not familiar with RWBY. It wasn't much effort but rarely do I see authors who actually bothered to do it.

really good rwby fanfic. keep writing good fanfics . . . . .

it's great. I love the world of RWBY and most writers of RWBY fanfics update rarely or drop it. Its a great and rare occasions to find a RWBY fanfic. So please please keep updating..

Would be nice if you could continue RWBY now that almost everyone is stuck at home due to the pandemic. So please try to write more into the RWBy fanfic. Almost all the other fanfics of RWBY end up up being dropped or rewritten.