The Star Lord is high and mighty
She was born in the Chaos and lived in the Wilderness. She was beautiful and noble.
She was immortal and had eternal life. As long as the chaos was not destroyed, she could live forever.
She threw the Star Pearl away and left the region herself. From then on, Su Ci's story began…
Small Theater:
One day, Su Ci sat in the Tianyu Palace and complained in a low voice, The biggest mistake I made was that I shouldn't have been soft-hearted."
Jiang Xu, who happened to hear this, smiled. His eyes were gentle as he looked at the woman and said gently,"Unfortunately, you're still soft-hearted."
Su Ci's heart skipped a beat, and the corners of her eyes twitched. This little bastard, he must be doing this on purpose.
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Overall if you ignore the spelling mistakes due to it from what im aware of being Google translated into English it is great fanfiction and interesting story However i personally i dont like the path that shirou was lead down in this timeline becoming a lot more bloodthirsty than i expected such as him killing Bazett of which is extremely tame for Magus I also think he transformed to much from his initial Hero of Justice to the point where he barely seemed like shirou while i do think he needed to change due to experiences in this Fanfiction it shouldn't have been to the degree that was seen in this fanfiction, for example in Kaleid Liner OuS shirou abandons his Dream of being a hero to protect Miyu however he is still very similar in temperament to shirou assuming you aren't threatening Miyu while also being moderately less forgiving