mlp sunset shimmer x male oc fanfiction

mlp stories should be protected. we have to support you (eg I would like to see sunset shimer before your arc) mlp <3 I hope your story is liked and you continue to write

not much to say, just very good overall. different from most mlp fanfics where it is just ships or some male oc getting together with mane 6 and/or more.

This story contains mature content, be prepared to skip or skim those chapters if you are not comfortable with mature content. The story is well paced, the plot is easy to follow and the characters are well written. Although it is a traditional rich oc x rich oc novel, it still has new elements that are added as the story progresses. The female oc is described as an intelligent, sophisticated, sophisticated, and strong; she is not overshadowed by the male oc. The male oc is her equal and they complement each other.

it's a Chinese translation and it shows there's a lot of weird phrases and calling people by what they're not called in the show like calling princess Celestia, Grand princess and within the first six chapters they talk about China and they use the phrase senior disciple a lot and then they start acting like a cultivation novel how she acts with sunset shimmer

i like the story oc male story are kinda rare the mc tryes to not risk his head most of the time but gets forced to act resulting in him becoming (part leader?) i like the devolpment with raven hope that goes on maybe raven x oc ?