bella smokes cigarettes fanfiction

Very slow, and the worst thing is he smokes cigarettes on a desert island, if you are tired of living don't eat, you are torturing yourself with nicotine, I stopped reading at this part.

the mc smokes and I have a very big prejudice against authors that makes their mc smoke because I have had very bad experience's with cigarettes in in my opinion any books where the mc smokes don't even deserve half a star let alone 1 star review

I HATE haw many times the writer keep describing how the Ml smoke. it's like every 4 phrases. it keeps interrupting the story line and is unrealistic. he smokes like 180 cigarettes at day. horrible

John Wick killed about 100 people in one movie. Meanwhile, our main character, having magic, several superpowers and a huge experience, what does he do? He drinks coffee, smokes cigarettes every 5 minutes, and conducts a monologue with himself, in which he constantly doubts his ability to destroy one gang. And so 5 chapters. Meanwhile, the Punisher and John Wick, who are ordinary people without superpowers...

5|4|1|2|3 meh...it's mid. 3 main things about this fic: 1. mc smokes weed 2. he does a little simping (just a little) 3. he smokes a lot of weed XD ps. why is this in the TL section??