I'm frivolous
Since you can't overpower the government and the people, you must be the richest in the world.
She was originally a lowly concubine's daughter, but she was willing to enter the palace for his grand ambitions. He said that when I ascend the throne, I will grant you a lifetime of glory. Who knew that the day he ascended the throne would be the day she would be in trouble.
She escaped from the dark dungeon like a new life. He temporarily avoided the countryside, hid his strength and bided his time, and soon became famous in the world. A concubine's daughter, originally frivolous, met the gods to kill, met the Buddha to kill Buddha. She said that on the day I return, I will destroy your beautiful rivers and mountains. I will make you pay for all the pain I have suffered.
However, after all the flowers had fallen, she had gone through thousands of sails, and she was gradually drifting away on the road of revenge. Would she still be moved again? Of course, the answer was yes!
The cool morning is full of joy
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Au début tout aller bien, sauf qu'au fur et à mesure... l'IA à malheuresement pris trop de place. Je ne parle pas de l'utiliser pour la relecture et la correction, mais pour tout le reste. On le ressent dans les phrase de cloture de chapitre - cet effet mecanique et creux. On le ressent dans les dialogues froid et impersonnel - chaque personnage devrait avoir ça façon de parler en fonction de sa personnalité et son age. De plus, les pensées du personne devienne de plus en plus étrange. Comment peut-il savoir des choses qui n'ont jamais été expliquer ? Comment s'est-il qu'il y a un passif entre la famille Voss et la sienne ? d'ou ça sort ? comment s'est-il que tout ceux réunis dans cette classe sont des Seigneur ?