Jester4Godz

nom nom to win obviously

royalroad has an edit function for your readers to offer suggestions easily it's also a very common thing for other writers to recommend another's books within their own works like giving a shout out as a way of boost your reader count

slain or killed sounds better

no lie you might have a little more success posting on royalroad

The goblin turned around now holding a wooden club of its own and retaliated by swinging back.

nice

them all sorry

he dodged barely escaping the all

my opinion of what flows better im not a right in anyway Just a native speaker

Hundreds of villagers ran out in fear; Some to put out the blazing storm of fire that was once their homes, others to to save their precious belongings.