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Well I had been checking this for years now and sadly this won’t ever come back. I have started writing my own story, which has academy, mystery, magic and bloodlines - “A CRACK IN NOTHING” - it’s a slowburn progressive adventure that starts slow but will pick a lot of speed from book 3 onwards. Do give it a read.

The character Wick Tanner (not John Wick), has a solid baseline for progressive fantasy. The book mixes the elements that I like - Ruins, Academy, Ancient, Mystery and more. I am glad this is not a cultivation or systems book. Story starts with Wick as a 11 year old and will build for years I think. It has really good foundation to become something great. Let’s see how the future chapters unfold.

Nah just two. The chapter names could be either of those.

I am looking forward to tomorrows chapter to see how he takes in the new updates from causality.

Existential Omniversal Lumen Emperor - doesn’t sit well that out of the blue Quintessence, Tyranny and rest are thrown out the door. There wasn’t enough substance for him to take that name - some new power okay.. but this just shows him throwing away the build up of 2000 chapters… Okay he still retains Quintessence, Mana etc - but identifying himself as Lumen Emperor seemed very half-assed.

Anti-existence, and how they could perceive existence to be anti-existence. Philosophically so true. Nice progression and thought process.

Nice introspection…