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InvicibleGod
InvicibleGodLv66yr
2018-10-08 21:04

i like your novel however there are many stuff that are making it bad and this makes me to want to drop the novel atleast for now 1.worldbackround very similar to other novels 2 story development is bad u just keep making everything bad every chapter there will be a hangclif and all the time you put the mc in the worst case scenario never 135c never did u give the mc a breath he always is on the losing end vs uncles daddys grandfathers greatgrandfathers grandmas and generaly ancestors he has 0 support nobody likes him im suprised by the second elder but even she cant do **** to support him she is even injured even her personal disciple doesnt like mc which is pure shiet if he had her support it would be much better 3 character design mc morals are horse**** yes the second elder helped him much and she sould get paid back hundredfold yes that other girl with the bow helped him A LOT and she should be paid for a lifetime i agree with those stuff he said BUT!!!!!! his father in law wanted to kill him and didnt just because he had good talent he wouldnt be in trouble in the first place if he didnt barge in with those stupid guards so i dont get his love for that guy. his fiancee xianer ONLY BRINGS HUUUUGE TROUBLE HUUUUGE TROUBLE AND EVEN MORE TROUBLE! thats all i think the fundation of the novel is bad and its not fixable because of the reasons above if in the future u still upload and i have seriously nothing to do and remeber this novel perhaps ill give it another try at that time

The Divine Nine-Dragon Cauldron

Heavenly Overlord
3.9
3239 Chs

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NinjaSkaal
NinjaSkaalLv10

hmmmmm... a finger can kill the Heavenly Overlord.... the author's name is Heavenly Overlord, i think i've found the secret meaning of the synopsis this story is about how the author writes a book to kill himself

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Ananya
AnanyaLv11

Stats and First impression:- Website: Qidian CN Status: Ongoing with about 2900+ chapters Views: 3.57 Million Recommendations: ~60 Thousand No. of Works: 2 Rating: 8.8/10 from 47 users Why did they sanction another cliched novel to be translated? I know cliches can't be avoided but it can be covered up with better writing but this novel is one of those which has a stale plot and cardboard characters, I'm sure of it after reading the raws.... Who decides on the novels to be translated? Don't they have better taste? There are clearly better novels out there but why sanction this novel containing recycled plot. Guys CN readers have rejected this novel! Do you know how? Look at the no of chapters, its close to 3000 chapters but look at the no of ratings, its only 47. Compare the no of views with recommendations, its 3.6 million views against 60 thousand recommendations. It clearly suggests that readers only bothered to check this novel out when they didn't have anything better to read and they didn't even bother to recommend it to others or even rate the novel for that matter. If you like transmigration CN fantasy novels with a stale plot and cardboard characterizations, then this novel is certainly for you!

6yr
azunyan
azunyanLv15

Protip to QI: If you want to entice people to vote for your novel, not using the stock CN Qidian synopsis really helps. The only stock Qidian synopsis that really works is the one for The Strongest System.

6yr
Daoist_Evernight
Daoist_EvernightLv13

Long ass title. Check Over used words including but not limited to, Dragon Legendary God Time and Space Destruction Heavenly Overlord Cauldron. Check The imperfect number 9. Check This story has what it takes to join the ranks of cliche harem novel.

6yr
JustaNovice
JustaNoviceLv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Satella_
Satella_Lv14

I vote because i dont want another romance webnovel thats it. And the picture looks nice. Lel. What i have nothing more to say

6yr
Nizze
NizzeLv11

I confess my ultimate goal in voting is to push away the release of the romance novels the farther away possible... And I wish they would revoke the releases of novels that had been on the list for 3 weeks without being choosen instead of leting it accumulate votes with time. Its unfair to the novels that come after this time... ù.ú

6yr
DaoistRainblow
DaoistRainblowLv4

The first 15 chapters are exactly the same as Path of the Flying Sword. Which to say, within the first chapter the transmigrated Mc started to think like a retarded local. This is the kind of story that makes you thankful that The Strongest System and Ultimate Scheming System exists.

6yr
Odriew
OdriewLv5

The series started out with a lot of promise. It quickly (within 5 chapters) devolves into the most stereotypical example of a generic xianxia you can imagine, with idiotic enemies inventing nonsensical reasons to come after the MC and acctractive women falling over themselves to give him presents at their first meetings. The translations are good, but the story is utter garbage.

6yr
LarkTreblig
LarkTrebligLv4

Based on the title and synopsis I can only write one word to describe it all "GENERIC". Imagine reading 2.9k chapters and you already know what to expect especially the super heavenly indominable imperial god plot armor. If I vote for this cr*p, I guess I won't get much mass release of the series like super gene from the translators. I will give this a chance and change my rating after reading a few chapters. IF THIS NOVEL REALLY DESERVES IT.

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