Review Detail of DaoDxD in Almighty Coach

There are quite a few problems with the translation. Why's the translator going with first name last name approach? Dai Li should be Li Dai. And please put some notes in places where Pinyin are used. The translator uses lao, which I assume is short for laoshi. I thought it was the guy's surname at first. There are also sentence formation errors, etc. after a few chapters. As for the story, since this is the first sports genre webnovel here, it's quite interesting & feels fresh to read.