Translation quality is solid, flows fine and has minor grammatical errors (usage of has/have etc). Story is about a guy that gets a system towards coaching, looks to be the typical being amazing and having others witness how amazing the MC is. There's little to no world building yet, but some world building is expected since the MC's system is about coaching and that'll involve international sports at one point. MC is just a blank slate really, and other characters are there to make him look good.
Victory General
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