Review Detail of kseriousr in Almighty Coach

Item: Almighty Coach
Rating: 3

Review detail

kseriousrLv46yrkseriousr

The story breaks the third law of Newton. There's little to no action and a helluvalot reaction. When will this trend die? I feel guilty reading this. It feels like a story meant for the kid who wants everyone to praise him and stroke his ego. Lots of useless stuff that can easily be cut to make the story compact and engaging .

Almighty Coach

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VenetaLv5Veneta

I think the author just doesn't want to make the story "compact" because chinese author got paid from the total words of his/her novel...

6yr

StrongMountainLv11StrongMountain

Bad news, After li dai meet his girlfriend, few conflict with gf family, story became less interesting... it goes few chapter like life skimmed by till Li dai goes to USA, and meet blade runner..

6yr

A_3Lv5A_3

skip, skip, and skip , one problem just 3 or 4 chapter, this story not good for novelian , but just make you drunk ,

6yr