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JimmC
JimmCLv105yrJimmC

The plot is terribly simplistic. The MC wants something, he gets it. If the MC needs money to pay for his land, he'll get it the next day. If he finds a girl attractive, she falls in love with him when he says "hello" just like that. As far as I can tell, there's no explanation of where the system came from. It just appears. Is it because he dove in the river trying to save someone? Or maybe because he tried cultivating land for 3 years? No clue. Also, despite it's name of "Pharmacist system" it's just to help grow plants so far, some of which have medicinal properties, but mostly just taste good. The translation/editing also needs work. Especially, as so many others have already said, the system dialogue that is not differentiated in any way. Bolding or italicizing it would solve this easily. As it stands it's really annoying.

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HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5HansTheCool

C'mon now, don't hate on op main characters

InfiniteGods
InfiniteGodsLv6InfiniteGods

So this is just another author wet dream novel?

JimmC
JimmCLv10JimmC

That's probably an apt description. Its a rags to riches story, except it happens practically overnight. The MC is down on his luck and kind of a laughingstock within his village one day, then the next he's rich and respected by everyone and his parents go from telling him to stop wasting his time and get a job to telling him what a great son he is and how he must be a genius.

InfiniteGods:So this is just another author wet dream novel?
LazyReader0
LazyReader0Lv6LazyReader0

You said it. Pfft

InfiniteGods:So this is just another author wet dream novel?
pandabanana
pandabananaLv5pandabanana

I like op just like you, but I kinda FÛCKING HATE things that come without rhyme or reason.

HansTheCool:C'mon now, don't hate on op main characters
pandabanana
pandabananaLv5pandabanana

Yup

InfiniteGods:So this is just another author wet dream novel?
ThyUnknownSaint
ThyUnknownSaintLv10ThyUnknownSaint

Well your right, I hate how every girl is extremely beautiful in extreme detail, it’s fine to say it once but to do it every time is a bit... The only thing Tong gots going for her is looks. Meanwhile sister is a tomboyish tsundere. Gotta love her more

DarkessInSilence
DarkessInSilenceLv4DarkessInSilence

It will become a Pharmacist System later you'll just have to wait.

noobslayer699
noobslayer699Lv5noobslayer699

aren't majority of system came out of nowhere?

JimmC
JimmCLv10JimmC

Eh, not really. It's more that the MC's power comes from unexpected sources. Finding an ancient artifact, an AI chip, meeting a crazy old man who turns out to be a super sage, even a gift from god are all sources of "cheats." But in this case it really just appears for no real reason. In this story the MC just touches an herb (that's literally what the author described it as, we're never told what the plant is or if it's special in any way) and we get this: "Detecting herbs…the triggering condition has been reached. Should we activate the system? " That's it. The condition is to touch a plant. The MC even asks what the system is and the answer is basically "Ok."

noobslayer699:aren't majority of system came out of nowhere?
Lazy_caterpillar
Lazy_caterpillarLv4Lazy_caterpillar

They say thoughts have power maybe mc had attained the esoteric knowledge of vibrational intelligence