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shelwyn
shelwynLv155yrshelwyn

The first half of this story is alright, half way through the author started having real life issues one after another. His quality dropped along with his chapter length. Marvin the Main Character is insanely strong but is always held back at important moments by one stupid thing after another later in the story. The arcs in the later half turn into stretched out garbage filler episodes. The story used to progress quickly and meaningfully, almoat everything had a sense of urgency. Eventually the story becomes a real slog of inaction and stronger and stronger enemies and allies that somehow suppress actions at the last moment. Effectively making the past few filler chapters null and void of any relevance. If noy for the translation team doing a great job I'd rate this story 2/5 stars because of how bad it gets layer on.

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Night Ranger

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Ruinshate
RuinshateLv10Ruinshate

I'll second that

PrunJuice
PrunJuiceLv5PrunJuice

I'm up to the pay walled chapters and couldn't agree more. Most authors throw their MC's into difficult situations to build ******* then save them with some plot armor. This author takes things the then next level by LITERALLY KILLING the MC in most final showdowns, then bringing him back to life with some bull****.

SilentMild
SilentMildLv6SilentMild

webnovel.com/book/12961364405159105/The-Legendary-Demon-Hunter Hi shelwyn :D hoping to catch your attention. Pls try checking out my work-in-progress novel - THE LEGENDARY DEMON HUNTER. It has 7 chapters currently, pls be the first one to comment and share your suggestions for improvements.