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Bellissama
BellissamaLv107yr
2018-03-18 18:47

I really want to give this story better rating, and I try to. But I just can't. There is no question about translation or update. The real problem is the author (I think??). The story pretty much using the same template with other story from this author (Mu Dan Feng), who loves to make reader laugh in the pretty lovey dovey moment in the beginning. Then when you hooked to the story, it begin downhill, 1 way to another, usually because the ML so secretive, FL too stubborn/fooled by ML, then lead to death/ separation of the couple. With tons of angst and rage (thrown by reader), although there will be "redemption" episode, but it's still pretty scarred the reader's weak heart. Please just read this story if you ready for tons of angst in the middle of story or get used to read this particular author's style. Honestly reading this like being in toxic relationship with emotional M tendency, you know it's gonna be bad, but you read it anyway, just for the funny + torture and angst moment.

Entangled with An Evil Lord

Mu Danfeng
4.6
3068 Chs

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Icelady082005
Icelady082005Lv5

yeah right, he killed difuyi and reborn him after 200 years, so sad :(

6yr
FluffyMehMeh
FluffyMehMehLv5

Ugh the synopsis and tags gave zero hints about the toxic relationship, I found their relationship interesting initially so I followed the story. At 700+ chapters the misunderstandings started to pile up and I started becoming suspicious. Thank goodness I went to look for spoilers, I managed to somehow protect my weak heart... Can't say that all that angst is my cup of tea. 😑

6yr
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Haxijiu
HaxijiuLv13

Whattt!! Difuyi die? Really? I'm crying 😭

Icelady082005:yeah right, he killed difuyi and reborn him after 200 years, so sad :(
6yr
Icelady082005
Icelady082005Lv5

Yes he did... But he will reincarnate in the upper bound.

Haxijiu:Whattt!! Difuyi die? Really? I'm crying 😭
6yr
Haxijiu
HaxijiuLv13

Wow I'm crying 😭 .. I badly want difuyi being together with xijiu. Did xijiu accept difuyi before difuyi die?

Icelady082005:Yes he did... But he will reincarnate in the upper bound.
6yr
Icelady082005
Icelady082005Lv5

I don't want to spoil it too much... They got married twice already I don't know if they will marry again after the reincarnation of difuyi.

Haxijiu:Wow I'm crying 😭 .. I badly want difuyi being together with xijiu. Did xijiu accept difuyi before difuyi die?
6yr
Haxijiu
HaxijiuLv13

OMG that the most saddest thing when they already married after that they being separated because of death.. now I'm unwilling to read the future chapters 😭😭😭😭 .. let them be happy together.

Icelady082005:I don't want to spoil it too much... They got married twice already I don't know if they will marry again after the reincarnation of difuyi.
6yr
anhzkie4
anhzkie4Lv4

Hi!may i know where can i read the complete chapter s of this novel?i'm already in chapter 1633 and waiting for the next chapter to be release is killing me 😣😢😢😢😢😢

6yr
Bellissama
BellissamaLv10

Afaik the easiest way u gotta read raw in MTL via Chrome. I cannot share link here, but u can google it by copy the chinese name (in novelupdates web)

anhzkie4:Hi!may i know where can i read the complete chapter s of this novel?i'm already in chapter 1633 and waiting for the next chapter to be release is killing me 😣😢😢😢😢😢
6yr
anhzkie4
anhzkie4Lv4

ok thanks

Bellissama:Afaik the easiest way u gotta read raw in MTL via Chrome. I cannot share link here, but u can google it by copy the chinese name (in novelupdates web)
6yr
MsRia
MsRiaLv13

Surprise! They met again after 200 years. Hahaha. I wasn't able to protect my heart. I cried a lot. Looking forward to better and lighter chapters

Haxijiu:OMG that the most saddest thing when they already married after that they being separated because of death.. now I'm unwilling to read the future chapters 😭😭😭😭 .. let them be happy together.
5yr
MsRia
MsRiaLv13

Surprise! They met again after 200 years. Hahaha. I wasn't able to protect my heart. I cried a lot. Looking forward to better and lighter chapters

Haxijiu:OMG that the most saddest thing when they already married after that they being separated because of death.. now I'm unwilling to read the future chapters 😭😭😭😭 .. let them be happy together.
5yr
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redbeans
redbeansLv1

About the synopsis of chinese original，here is general meaning： 'hi，handsome guy，can i grab your clothes？' , a girl suddenly disrobes a demon prince who is concentrating on practice and then escapes freely. Seconds later，the guy realized what had happened。(#ﾟДﾟ).. he ordered to catch her angrily ......... He is a king of this world. noble, handsome and marblehearted. She is the king of modern assassins. talented but incompatible and venomous. For her，he was a scorpoin，she avoided him eagerly. but he traced her all the time. People said she was a female demon. but for he，she was exclusive property. he said i can forgive those who insulted me，but I'll kill all the person who insulted her.(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ please ignore my poor english_(:з」∠)_

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Humble_Man
Humble_ManLv3

An amazing novel, best for girls and people who like female protagonist. A touch of comedy, inspiration, journey, adventure, rebirth, betrayal, love, constitutes all factors. An amazing dish with touch of all spices. it gets really exciting in chapters ahead.

7yr
LuluoO
LuluoOLv13

The start of this novel is very good, especially a first meeting of main characters. It was funny... Male lead is very intriguing and secretive. Can't wait to see a future development of the story.

7yr
BLUEPHOENIX
BLUEPHOENIXLv4

Reveal spoiler

7yr
Nre
NreLv4

Great novel with female protagonist. Although similar to other novels. The sad part however is that the chapters are too shOrt. .

7yr
MountainofBooks
MountainofBooksLv4

Hilarious 😂👍🏻 I was dying of laughter while reading, those two are just so alike sometimes. Great novel, I can’t wait for the next chapter to be translated

7yr
TEWTEW
TEWTEWLv11

At first I thought this story was interesting and well written... as time went on there were more and more holes in the story. Random things would happen with no reason, and characters would do things randomly out of their character. The story makes no sense anymore. I’m on chapter 70 and I’ve already given up on following up with the story. There are also a few translation errors, but the story is updated fast!

7yr
au18
au18Lv5

Transmigration story. Interesting premise so far. As of chapter 60, seems like a smart and strong female protagonist, hopefully it stays that way.

7yr
WanderingSage
WanderingSageLv5

Not much to talk about after only 20 chapters. However some things are clear. Chapters are half length like in Hidden Marriage, so 20 chapters/week is basically 10 chapters/week for a 'normal' novel. Also I totally expect it to follow all tropes of 'Female MC Who Transmigrates to Ancient World' the way the book is going right now. I have limited my expectations and so I won't be disappointed when there is nothing original. My future ratings will depend upon how well these tropes are implemented, however it will never get over 4 stars from me here. Also the Chinese RAWs have around 1k chapters and they are still being updated, so this novel may very well go on to have like 3k-4k chapters finally (pure speculation i haven't read any of them so they might end on 1.5k for all we know). Just a bit of warning.

7yr
angeson
angesonLv5

Very good work,but lack originally compared to same line novels.the story has too many cliche,and you can pretty much guess what gonna happen. But I have to say they did a good work on translating this.congrats,

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