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TEWTEWLv117yr
2017-11-21 15:23

At first I thought this story was interesting and well written... as time went on there were more and more holes in the story. Random things would happen with no reason, and characters would do things randomly out of their character. The story makes no sense anymore. I’m on chapter 70 and I’ve already given up on following up with the story. There are also a few translation errors, but the story is updated fast!

Entangled with An Evil Lord

Mu Danfeng
4.6
3068 Chs

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Saru
SaruLv3

I agree I stopped at 220 though I’ve stopped several times before I got to that amount of chapters wanted to preserve but it just frustrated me and disappointed me. In the end she’ll be falling in to a predictable path.

7yr
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Artimis1
Artimis1Lv6

Truly tragedy I'm reading this book until chapter 400 almost want to kill myself every time and after that I couldn't bearing anymore so I go and read spoilers and find out this is just beginning of the tragedy and there's more and more of it await us reader so after that because of psychic I decided to drop this novel. So for those who have metal nerve for tragedy I recommend this novel to you.

7yr
Goldswan
GoldswanLv12

From the first time, I read this novel .. the story is very insteresting.. unpredictable story... so very recomended to read.... the problem is i can't stop reading this novel... to exited to know the next chapter.. .

6yr
1
Jay_yeol
Jay_yeolLv11

Same thoughts. I'm on the latest update but I'm already utterly disgusted with the flow of events. There are tons of loop holes and the Main Gurl's attitude has become dumb and way too stupid (sorry for the terms). I'm on the verge of dropping this story, I'm only holding on to the main guy's character. His development is far too awesome tho.

6yr
3
Tall_Bun
Tall_BunLv3

I agree with you on some parts. I am still waiting for some events to be explained. I thought I was the only one who missed the early explanation.

6yr
1
lux21
lux21Lv10

Why the author make the 12th prince and the main sister came back to life.. It make me want to drop the chapter whenever I read about that

6yr
Angelwingz0920
Angelwingz0920Lv4

Same

6yr
zygade
zygadeLv10

I agree. Even though i didnt read this religiously like GEWW or FHMH, i tried to follow tru n continue. The author tries to put too much twists n turns that it actually ruin the plot. Random things and characters happen n not incorporated with the storyline.

6yr
2
zygade
zygadeLv10

I currently stopped at ard chapter 970plus

6yr
1
mirane98
mirane98Lv5

I lost interest in this novel after a few hundred chapters. It was getting too predictable for me and I just somehow hated the "prince" for some reason. He'd just too much and idk why lol.

6yr
Michii08
Michii08Lv5

What is GEWW and FHMH, I’m thinking of dropping this story and wanna read some good ones

zygade:I agree. Even though i didnt read this religiously like GEWW or FHMH, i tried to follow tru n continue. The author tries to put too much twists n turns that it actually ruin the plot. Random things and characters happen n not incorporated with the storyline.
6yr
zygade
zygadeLv10

Ghost Emperor Wild Wife and Full Marks Hidden Marriage. FMHM....wrong abbreviation in the earlier comments. This is the number one novel

Michii08:What is GEWW and FHMH, I’m thinking of dropping this story and wanna read some good ones
6yr
1
Michii08
Michii08Lv5

Thanks so much for these info 😁

zygade:Ghost Emperor Wild Wife and Full Marks Hidden Marriage. FMHM....wrong abbreviation in the earlier comments. This is the number one novel
6yr
sfc
sfcLv6

Same here...i gave up too

6yr
darlingmeow
darlingmeowLv13

Yes. I stop because i get bored with the female MC. Reading suppose to make me happy, enjoyed and relax. But this story keep me depress and annoyed. I better spend my spirit stone to more exciting and heart warming story. GEWW and FMHM is more fun to read. Perfect Secret Love: The Bad New Wife is a little Sweet also entertaining but the update is too slow

6yr
Jazel12
Jazel12Lv2

😍😍

6yr
mike_holmes
mike_holmesLv1

Same here

Tall_Bun:I agree with you on some parts. I am still waiting for some events to be explained. I thought I was the only one who missed the early explanation.
5yr
Alisa_Leslie269
Alisa_Leslie269Lv2

Hi! I'd love it if you'd check out my story.Its called Follow Through and has a funny,food loving FL with special abilities and lots of heated romance.Let me know if you'd like the link

4yr
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redbeans
redbeansLv1

About the synopsis of chinese original，here is general meaning： 'hi，handsome guy，can i grab your clothes？' , a girl suddenly disrobes a demon prince who is concentrating on practice and then escapes freely. Seconds later，the guy realized what had happened。(#ﾟДﾟ).. he ordered to catch her angrily ......... He is a king of this world. noble, handsome and marblehearted. She is the king of modern assassins. talented but incompatible and venomous. For her，he was a scorpoin，she avoided him eagerly. but he traced her all the time. People said she was a female demon. but for he，she was exclusive property. he said i can forgive those who insulted me，but I'll kill all the person who insulted her.(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ please ignore my poor english_(:з」∠)_

7yr

Humble_Man
Humble_ManLv3

An amazing novel, best for girls and people who like female protagonist. A touch of comedy, inspiration, journey, adventure, rebirth, betrayal, love, constitutes all factors. An amazing dish with touch of all spices. it gets really exciting in chapters ahead.

7yr
LuluoO
LuluoOLv13

The start of this novel is very good, especially a first meeting of main characters. It was funny... Male lead is very intriguing and secretive. Can't wait to see a future development of the story.

7yr
BLUEPHOENIX
BLUEPHOENIXLv4

Reveal spoiler

7yr
Nre
NreLv4

Great novel with female protagonist. Although similar to other novels. The sad part however is that the chapters are too shOrt. .

7yr
MountainofBooks
MountainofBooksLv4

Hilarious 😂👍🏻 I was dying of laughter while reading, those two are just so alike sometimes. Great novel, I can’t wait for the next chapter to be translated

7yr
au18
au18Lv5

Transmigration story. Interesting premise so far. As of chapter 60, seems like a smart and strong female protagonist, hopefully it stays that way.

7yr
WanderingSage
WanderingSageLv5

Not much to talk about after only 20 chapters. However some things are clear. Chapters are half length like in Hidden Marriage, so 20 chapters/week is basically 10 chapters/week for a 'normal' novel. Also I totally expect it to follow all tropes of 'Female MC Who Transmigrates to Ancient World' the way the book is going right now. I have limited my expectations and so I won't be disappointed when there is nothing original. My future ratings will depend upon how well these tropes are implemented, however it will never get over 4 stars from me here. Also the Chinese RAWs have around 1k chapters and they are still being updated, so this novel may very well go on to have like 3k-4k chapters finally (pure speculation i haven't read any of them so they might end on 1.5k for all we know). Just a bit of warning.

7yr
angeson
angesonLv5

Very good work,but lack originally compared to same line novels.the story has too many cliche,and you can pretty much guess what gonna happen. But I have to say they did a good work on translating this.congrats,

7yr
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