Review Detail of analyst123 in Mystical Journey
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The story is not consistent. In the first chapter it is mentioned that the MC and his sister are ordinary people without any talents. Though the MC's turned out to be true, the sister is talented in archery. Even the technology of the world is inconsistent. It is mentioned that there are cars and planes. But the MC travelled in carriage in 1 chapter. The names are also not to my liking. Go with western completely or chinese completely. I was not able to go past chapter 30 with that many plot inconsistencies.
Mystical Journey
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Right on. I am surprised that not more people mention this. In particular, chapter 1 explicitly states that both brother and sister shared the same hair and eye color inherited from their parents. In chapter 10, they suddenly became step-siblings. I was befuddled how the changed relationships for his convenience of convoluted romance.
