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BedlessSleeper
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Mystical Journey is one of my favourite things to read on Qidian lately, and it doesn't seem to be having any issues in delivering to expectations up and giving the readers something to enjoy. If you haven't read this yet, it's basically about a Chinese guy who died and through luck and fortune ended up being the only surviving person to successfully be transported to another world. He first tries to adapt and live life like normal, but is thrown into a world beyond his imaginations and seeks power. He is a talented martial artist who is assisted by a game-like system that isn't overpowered and requires 'potential points' that is gained from external sources. (currently unknown). He fights, develops, and gets stronger in a nice and enjoyable way that we readers can mostly accept and acknowledge that he deserves where he is from the effort he has put. However, he isn't limited to these worlds and travels to other worlds and attempts to be the strongest there as well in order to be 'free' and to fulfil his dream of being the strongest martial artist. Currently, he has travelled to two unique and different worlds. Stability of Updates -There is always two chapters every day. That's 14 chapters a week! -Problem is, there have been some occasions that get me and ALL other readers annoyed which is that some chapters get DUPLICATED! (Currently has occurred twice, goodbye SS) Story Development -The story develops at a consistent rate. -Unique or at least different to most other stories with similar game systems. -Not all characters are forgotten and sometimes they leave lasting impressions and even create real feelings due to betrayal and death. Character Design -Most characters are unique and have impacts on the MC and story. -Some characters are forgotten/have no meaning but that can't be helped when there are so many to keep track of. -MC develops properly or at least something I can accept instead of some other dumb stories that have outlandish and stupid motivators/ character actions. World Background- Good, im just gonna keep it short because I want to get to translation quality... and oh boy.. Translation Quality. -TERIRIBLE -UNREADABLE -Okay, I was just overexaggerating there but recently, it HAS been TERRIBLE. Read Chapter 305, and you will understand. PLEASE GET A NEW TRANSLATOR/EDITOR. It is no joke a bot, if not someone who just doesn't care and is trolling. -And to be serious, I'm pretty sure it the quality was good at least at the beginning. Halfway through the first world or 100+ish chapters, there was barely any mistakes. After the quality just started to drop and has now plummeted. For example... CHP-305 [""Do not kill me, beg you, don’t do not!" The girl cried splinters."] >And this is CONSISTENT in this chapter... [""Wwe are led directly by him, he knows tThe most, it was this is by his request that I came in contact with you! It’s none of Not my business!"] This book is good, and if you want to read it, read it. But by the time you get to chapter 250+, get ready to drop unless your comitted or we have gotten a new transltor. SERIOUSLY, this is not even a joke! GET A NEW ONE PLEASE.

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Notso
NotsoLv6Notso

This review needs to be on top.

FourEyes
FourEyesLv12FourEyes

Fierce review 😁, What about sect building? Did he start?

BedlessSleeper
BedlessSleeperLv10BedlessSleeper

Spoiler, there is a bit of it, but no there isn't. There may be something similar in the future, but I doubt it. This is a story of someone becoming the pinnacle, not someone being strong and fostering students to parade his glory. He will show his glory to the world, and they will bow.

FourEyes:Fierce review 😁, What about sect building? Did he start?
FourEyes
FourEyesLv12FourEyes

Oh thanks! Its great help!

BedlessSleeper:Spoiler, there is a bit of it, but no there isn't. There may be something similar in the future, but I doubt it. This is a story of someone becoming the pinnacle, not someone being strong and fostering students to parade his glory. He will show his glory to the world, and they will bow.
BedlessSleeper
BedlessSleeperLv10BedlessSleeper

I don't know how to edit reviews but... UPDATE: As of chapter 307+, the translation quality has improved so much. There is a bit of error here and there, but it really is godsend compared to the atrocity it was in chapter 305. The story is picking up the pace a lot more, and now it is easy to understand thanks to properly structured sentences. I'm glad I didn't drop it after chapter 305, and I'm really happy that us readers have a voice that we can use. It just so happens that, after my rant on chapter 305 and getting a TON of likes, the translation quality upped itself right after. Coincidence? I think not...... ...maybe.

JSJJ
JSJJLv12JSJJ

If you like this try Way of the Devil. It is the next novel by this author. Each novel this author writes is better than his last one!

DaoLeaf
DaoLeafLv4DaoLeaf

Now this is how you write a damn review, why is it so hard for people to do just that. I don't want to know when your goldfish died, damn. (To let u know y I'm writing my own crap comment, it's cuz I'm just glad to see a normal review when I actually need one for once.)

geot5
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rockinroll39
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I agree with you there. Allot of reviews are just "this story is amazing/terrible blah blah blah read/drop" pretty much sums up most reviews. Like, why can't people explain themselves more. I'll take martial god asura for example. I personally didn't like the story for a few reasons, but instead of being a idiot and do some dumb review, I did a small simple review about why I personally didn't like it but why others may like it. People leaving crappy reviews who do nothing but do 1 sentence about why they loved/hated it is pretty useless. It tells people nothing. When im starting a new read, I like to go through the comments to find reviews that actually lay out the book, which often times takes a good 10-15 minutes to find like 2-3 reviews that are REAL reviews,

DaoLeaf:Now this is how you write a damn review, why is it so hard for people to do just that. I don't want to know when your goldfish died, damn. (To let u know y I'm writing my own crap comment, it's cuz I'm just glad to see a normal review when I actually need one for once.)
NATSUbirazz
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Great noble. Loved it

ExtrovertLoner
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So are the chapters already edited? I can't read books with too many grammar mistakes

ImmortalWhoNutts
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thanks for this review man..

Daoist858619
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FAXHNB

Daoist858619
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FAXHNB

Daoist858619
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FAXHNB

demented1
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That's really wonderful.

GodNox
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Need more people like you in this world, great explanation .