Review Detail of Elder in The Spiritual Attainment of Minghe
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BullShit... Do not read, possible internal damage... Coughs up blood.... If you are so strong that you have read more than one chapter... (And even get to 3...) You will get cool abilities: travel 200 thousand miles in a second, gain the ability to transform into 108 kinds of divine beasts, and direct attacks targeted at you towards any of 480000000 Clones of Blood God that you own. (Each of which increases your prediction capabilities) You will certainly get more divine original artifacts than anyone else... The ability to be reborn as many times as you wish, and many other abilities, from the description of which Sasuke will cry bloody tears... Though you had spent hundreds of thousands of years without a physical form and later another 130 thousand years to complete yours Clones of Blood God. Hero i must congratulate you, you remained a virgin not only 20 earth years, but also hundreds of thousands of years in another world.... (Sitting in one place) For this you get a unique ability there is no logic there is a line author....
The Spiritual Attainment of Minghe
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LoL the naruto reference that author put to show us the guy must truly be an IT otaku fascinated me. Seriously, I immediately wanted to leave the novel in peace when I saw he was a semi saint, second to only the highest cultivation realm. Then I saw a thousand year time skip and my eyes almost bulged out. Then the 480000000 clone. Then the 130000 years of time skip. I survived 3 chapters. Author throws in every big number passes through his head and every chuunni techniques and treasure out there to ensnare the readers to keep reading. Wrong way to do it mate. The story makes a novel worth-while reading, not the power nor the items-.
kseriousr:LoL the naruto reference that author put to show us the guy must truly be an IT otaku fascinated me. Seriously, I immediately wanted to leave the novel in peace when I saw he was a semi saint, second to only the highest cultivation realm. Then I saw a thousand year time skip and my eyes almost bulged out. Then the 480000000 clone. Then the 130000 years of time skip. I survived 3 chapters. Author throws in every big number passes through his head and every chuunni techniques and treasure out there to ensnare the readers to keep reading. Wrong way to do it mate. The story makes a novel worth-while reading, not the power nor the items-.
kseriousr:LoL the naruto reference that author put to show us the guy must truly be an IT otaku fascinated me. Seriously, I immediately wanted to leave the novel in peace when I saw he was a semi saint, second to only the highest cultivation realm. Then I saw a thousand year time skip and my eyes almost bulged out. Then the 480000000 clone. Then the 130000 years of time skip. I survived 3 chapters. Author throws in every big number passes through his head and every chuunni techniques and treasure out there to ensnare the readers to keep reading. Wrong way to do it mate. The story makes a novel worth-while reading, not the power nor the items-.
Chinese novelist loves to throw up large numbers to make it impressive. Like 10,000 feet of destruction with a single punch. But blood cloud flying faster than the speed of light? And it still takes him few days to fly out of the blood sea? You can fly few times back and forth between our sun to Pluto. Only takes about 4.3 light years to fly to Alpha Centauri, but MC takes 100 years to get to the Pangu mount, just how freaking huge is this untainted land? Is it the Milky Way we talking about?
Transn:So sorry to make you confuse about the story. This kind of expression did exist in some Chinese novels. Maybe authors think it's necessary to spend many years on the cultivation. Thanks for you advice.
Chouhouin:Chinese novelist loves to throw up large numbers to make it impressive. Like 10,000 feet of destruction with a single punch. But blood cloud flying faster than the speed of light? And it still takes him few days to fly out of the blood sea? You can fly few times back and forth between our sun to Pluto. Only takes about 4.3 light years to fly to Alpha Centauri, but MC takes 100 years to get to the Pangu mount, just how freaking huge is this untainted land? Is it the Milky Way we talking about?
Skip the first 20 chapters and you get a great story without all the idiotic villains obsessed with mc for no reason, stupid harem or face slapping just because. It really does turn into a great novel later on! With brilliant world building, faction politics and *gasp* story arcs that do not center and revolve around the MC, with actual, thinking, intelligent characters capable of independent thought and rational decision making!
Yes it does. First rate better. Not clichee development or harem dependent, but full of great chars with their own personalities! I think the first 20 chapters were...practice? A way of finding out how to write cultivation novels? The author improves his writing, world building and character development a lot and from chapter 20 onwards it gets addictive!
DaoistFatGrandma:Maybe it gets better, probably not
Bro go look at just about any novel by I way tomatoes... To immortals/gods in most of his novels the milky way is incomparably small. đ
Chouhouin:Chinese novelist loves to throw up large numbers to make it impressive. Like 10,000 feet of destruction with a single punch. But blood cloud flying faster than the speed of light? And it still takes him few days to fly out of the blood sea? You can fly few times back and forth between our sun to Pluto. Only takes about 4.3 light years to fly to Alpha Centauri, but MC takes 100 years to get to the Pangu mount, just how freaking huge is this untainted land? Is it the Milky Way we talking about?
A good author builds up the scale organically as the characters develope and engages you with the story and not by the size of the world. Here, it's like you're reading the last chapter of a story. No suspense to keep me hooked.
Randomlyrandom:In many Chinese novels that have immortals millions of years in a cultivation session is nothing.. And as for the size of the mountain...issth. nuff said.
Honestly the first couple of chapters were a bit of a challenge to get through, but it does get a lot better as it progresses.
kseriousr:A good author builds up the scale organically as the characters develope and engages you with the story and not by the size of the world. Here, it's like you're reading the last chapter of a story. No suspense to keep me hooked.
I might give it another try then. I've seen a few novels with disastrous start that eventually became my favorites, so no point brooding over that.
Randomlyrandom:Honestly the first couple of chapters were a bit of a challenge to get through, but it does get a lot better as it progresses.