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NixesLv57yr
2018-02-06 01:24

Okay...here's my fresh out of the keyboard review. BORING. CLICHED. FILLERS. The story offers nothing new. It follows the same trend as other female MC novels of similar type. Right from the mysterious male lead to MC's cheat service, there's nothing fresh or interesting The author has copied points from other famous female novels. The General household, the overly loving grandpa, the amputated uncle, the lists simply goes on and on. Even here the arcs are not well executed. They feel disjointed and rushed. The flow that needs to be there, is lacking. Overall it looks more like reading a series of short stories. Female MC's character...difficult to say. Author has tried to make her a badass swindler MC with the generic doctor history. He failed. She looks more like an arrogant antagonist out of a Xianxia novel. Her swindling is forced and clearly unbelievable. Either she's so charming that the swindled person can't realise or the swindled person is so dumb that he doesn't realises You again have the set of characters required in a female MC novel from a general household. The PM house, the fiancee prince , the king etc. Their character build is extremely plain with nodepth. Anyway I can't find any redeeming factor about this novel apart from it being a female MC novel. The author has played safe. A disappointing read full of cliches after cliches joined with chapters full of fillers. The only fun point: the novel is fast, the translator is great. Nixes (As of chapter 60)

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TEWTEWLv11

FINALLY. A review that actually makes sense. Thank you. I cannot read this novel anymore... cliche trash.

AyushiridaraLv5

I just started reading until chap 20 but it feels like a summary of genius doctor: black belly miss. I don't feel like reading it anymore.

BongomewLv4

This. I totally agree! I’ve been putting up with storyline that jumps to and fro and the characters...i don’t know where to start with the characters, they’re simply unbearable! From the MC’s family to the others, (maybe mc included?),

LiliekfeaLv2

Sorry i don't agree. I wnjoy the story

NovelzzzLv4

*sigh liliekfea,u poor thing, you've must have never been able to get a chance to know Ling Lan! one of the dopest Female MC in the web novel!

NovelzzzLv4

*sigh liliekfea,u poor thing, you've must have never been able to get a chance to know Ling Lan! one of the dopest Female MC in the web novel!

Liliekfea:Sorry i don't agree. I wnjoy the story
Marjor3eLv11

Try something new and unique - The King's Beloved - i recommend it if you like romance fiction, totally not a cliche story

iloveoppasLv4

I was just going to say that I half relate to your review because if swindling part... But I actually relate to everything you said.. it's true... But I still am reading the book... Because it's my first book on webnovel... I think newcomer's like me won't mind .. lol

NghiBui1527Lv10

Who is Ling Lan? From what book?!?

Novelzzz:*sigh liliekfea,u poor thing, you've must have never been able to get a chance to know Ling Lan! one of the dopest Female MC in the web novel!
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