Review Detail of WidestGrin in Stealing the Heavens

The story itself has quite a bit if potential but the way the author has written this seems just like a puppet show. The characters are like empty wooden shells without any flesh. Normally a character is potrayed with proper descriptions including his appearance, expressions, feelings, body movements,etc. Here, on the other hand, inly shows what the character is doing. Even the background feels like the artificial props on a stage. The style simply doesn't show what kind of world the protagonist has travelled through. In the first few chapters all we get to know is that the other world has a lot if spiritual energy and strong sunlight. Dissapointing in many ways. Wish the author did more justice to the story.🙁