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vadi
vadiLv125yr
2019-10-14 21:33

So I spent money on a novel that will not be finished? No updates for 5 months. Don’t spend your money until someone starts it up again or it will be wasted. I will say story is good but just sad there is no ending to it.

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ATCkit
ATCkitLv5

if you want to read the ending go to MTL. for a machine-translated tho

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Valvrave
ValvraveLv6

Clearly, I'm heavily influenced by editing this novel ;p Still, I had to make a review since I'm a harcc0re fellow reader xD I've been working on the novel since the very start, you can say it's my editing baby. Along with it, I'm growing up too, and striving to improve. Let's get things straight; it's not your every day post-apocalyptic novel, you won't find too gruesome scenes like other novels of its kind. Several times, the MC looks like a NPC game character, he's not that talkative but that's what makes him special. He just shows things through his actions, he knows he is weak and he strives to improve. Some people may not like his decisions, but it's still being elaborated why he didn't do something. Some people complain about the short chapters, I on the other hand, not because I have to work less - on the contrary I have to work more to rephrase some lines in order to make the reader 'feel' what's taking place, prefer that the chapters are smaller cause they're not that repetitive and you hardly want to skip lines (once again that's how I feel, you may have other opinions.) I will agree that it resembles dbz fights, but you can still wait for it to pile up and binge read it later, at least that's what I do with most novels ;p Last but not least, I find the concept really intriguing. I mean, a car that can be constantly upgraded? What will it become next, an air-carrier, a spaceship, a Transformer, Gundam, Power Rangers' Megazord? There are plenty of choices ;p That's all I had to say till this point, if anything changes I'll update ;p Thank you for your feedback and your support for the novel ^_^ P.S. The updating stability is top-notch, we haven't missed a chapter ;p

Dvaita
DvaitaLv5

This is a cookie-cutter apocalypse story that's actually a cultivation novel in disguise. As usual, the world ends in zombies and China numbah 1 in zombies as well. Our MC, who had access to a mysterious alien tech, starts Doomsday prepping with limited resources. Unfortunately, once the end of the fuckin world actually comes, he promptly goes around offending all with his minibus and a harem that he collects with his MC aura. There's an inkling of a larger plot, about a secret Illuminati thing that knew the apocalypse was coming, but that's left undeveloped for a large part of the story. The minibus he owns is a super advanced futuristic mobile base and the MC is diligent in enhancing it's features only to never use them. He added a biological lab and never used it more than twice. He added an automated 3D printer for weapons and completely forgot about it the next chapter. And here's the best part of the bus. It uses a potato Cannon that fires compressed air. In this universe, apparently nothing's stronger than compressed air. The side characters never question the complete breakdown of physics. With the MC in the picture, spacetime inversion, advanced science, FTL travel, the second coming of Christ... Everything is possible. And his ability, which has nothing to do with the capabilities he exhibits are completely ignored and not questioned by a single character. The plot is a nightmarish mishmash of standard cliches. Around chapter 600, the author got bored of the junk in the novel and took the plot to Japan for the standard Chinese racism best racism. Leave your logic and rationality elsewhere to read this

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