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2022-01-07 21:44

I have read over 100 chapters, which maybe a-lot or maybe its not that much, but I can only say, "What a waste of time!". The writing is quite poor, the plot is not very rational many-a-times, and it feels very contrived, especially the tension and conflict. Very disappointed, of what I've read from Er Gen, this and ISSTH have similar problems, while his only novel I enjoyed is AWE and thats because of the early part of the story basically up until the end of the Night-crypt arc and Bai Xioachun as a main character. All of his novels have problems but AWE is much more lighthearted so I don't care as much, however this novel is not like that which only adds to make me feel even more annoyed. Basically reading this is an exercise in self-mutilation.

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Devilking122
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Wait just read upto 200. I actually dropped it at 80. Because i got bored. Bit after some time i pick it up again. And after chapter 120 this novel getting better and better by passing each chapter. Just gave it a try upto 200. If u don't like it upto 200 then drop it

Devilking122
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Devilking122:Wait just read upto 200. I actually dropped it at 80. Because i got bored. Bit after some time i pick it up again. And after chapter 120 this novel getting better and better by passing each chapter. Just gave it a try upto 200. If u don't like it upto 200 then drop it
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