Review Detail of DaoistShylock in Child of Light

This is story it´s badly writen, and it´s a problem of the author not of the translator. Not a problem with the plot but there are a few of things that make me drop this in the third chapter: -In the first chapter the author JUSTIFIES the narrator, and he did it quite badly. -The narrator voice, the MC, wow... it is really anoying, and it´s not believable thats not the voice of a seven years old. -THE SPOILERS, the author just throw a lot of sopilers inside his story.