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Review Detail of PiffPaff in Shadow Hack

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PiffPaff
PiffPaffLv106yrPiffPaff

This novel must have been written by the 12 year old son of the owner of Qidian or something. Otherwise it is beyond me how it could reach rank 1. Everything within this story barely scratches the surface. Ability? Family? World building? Main character? Friends and Love Interest? Each of those barely get half a sentence in passing, before we move on to the next clichee.

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Shadow Hack

Great Lord of Cloudland

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Replies13

Sknohs
SknohsLv5Sknohs

Agree

YourDueIsFair
YourDueIsFairLv3YourDueIsFair

True

NameHere
NameHereLv4NameHere

Of course. Why I didn't thought about this.

DurzoBint
DurzoBintLv13DurzoBint

Omg this just led to an breakthrough in my understanding :o

Hell_lord
Hell_lordLv6Hell_lord

Hoo

Avalox
AvaloxLv5Avalox

Holy **** you're right

LiShokuye
LiShokuyeLv4LiShokuye

Omg ur rite LOL

Grape
GrapeLv13Grape

Your wrong, these are all fleshed out, but you've only read up to chapter 10, of course it wouldn't have done it by then

PiffPaff
PiffPaffLv10PiffPaff

When i wrote this, that was all of the novel. What Else can i das?

Grape:Your wrong, these are all fleshed out, but you've only read up to chapter 10, of course it wouldn't have done it by then
geot5
geot5Lv5geot5

a

VenerableAnnLust
VenerableAnnLustLv6VenerableAnnLust

World building is good. Abilities are clear as day. And our Yunmu need no friends 😅 As for the family, author did mention his parents a few times. Yunmu holds his family mpre dear thn the world itself (it's another thing that the family is irrelevant to the story 😂😂)

VenerableAnnLust
VenerableAnnLustLv6VenerableAnnLust

World building is good. Abilities are clear as day. And our Yunmu need no friends 😅 As for the family, author did mention his parents a few times. Yunmu holds his family mpre dear thn the world itself (it's another thing that the family is irrelevant to the story 😂😂)

Jack_Smith_3423
Jack_Smith_3423Lv3Jack_Smith_3423

I dropped the story, then thought about giving it another chance...it isn't worth my time. It's like I'm reading a wattpad book 🙄