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Darkeast
DarkeastLv46yr
2018-01-04 07:01

From the 18 chaps until now, I don't see a Harem, or a Stupid MC, or an Over Powered MC (well, sometimes), the storyline is very captivating, it's a "system" meant to hack, obviously. Tags: [weak to strong], [fast paced improvement], [system], [skills drops], [unique cultivation system], [funny], [not enough chapters per week], [want more], [translator work harder pls]

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lyufeng
lyufengLv3

I love the novel too

Rithy
RithyLv10

no no no, MC is stupid. he got 24 hour bot yet he can't even find the way to abuse it and choose to use the straightforward way wasting almost 1 month just to obtain 1 cultivation skill //face palm

Rithy
RithyLv10

the story is also very generic. It's a mix and match from other novel. it's fine if author can't make originality out of it. but the way the story is introduced and narrated is so terrible full of bull****ting blah blah blah, blabbering insignificant none stop.

Stark3
Stark3Lv14

Granted, the MC doesn't start off as too OP. But later on, he gets stupidly overpowered. Imagine this: to clear off a level in a tower, he defeated a monster wave with 100 rank 3 beasts, 5 rank 4 beasts, and 1 rank 5.... while being at the peak of rank 1. With just himself and his shadow clones.

sparka
sparkaLv11

hmm i honestly say i like this review i se al the negative noobs who didnt actually read that he wants to keep it secret and has to have computer turned on for it to work and far as him not using the system the reason was given it was updating only got a few skills wel there either expensive or learned threw combat sorry he didnt reincarnate as an all knowing super genious if you want that get the f out and go read 90 percent of the other novels

Charizma
CharizmaLv6

I read past ch.50 and I must say that the MC is very, very, very stupid. If this type of person was in real life I would be 90% certain his brain has a serious defect.

Inquisitor_Arkhart
Inquisitor_ArkhartLv5

Still reading from time to time it's still bad, MC is still stupid and the quality of writing is like the ego trip of an idiot. Aside from that must say good translations and regular update but content wise meh.

sparka:hmm i honestly say i like this review i se al the negative noobs who didnt actually read that he wants to keep it secret and has to have computer turned on for it to work and far as him not using the system the reason was given it was updating only got a few skills wel there either expensive or learned threw combat sorry he didnt reincarnate as an all knowing super genious if you want that get the f out and go read 90 percent of the other novels
Greedman
GreedmanLv4

No harem=true Not a stupid MC=false Not overpowered MC=false. System is overpowered as fuck, MC's character is an empty shell,and the reason this is not a harem is because MC is so retarded he can not even land one girl not speaking of more

peluche
pelucheLv10

I don't understand how you're not seeing the 'stupid mc' and 'op mc'. The [fast paced improvement] also confuses me

Darkeast
DarkeastLv4

OK, this Review is outdated

LYNie0
LYNie0Lv2

MC os normal person and the values became a honred member familiar or friend.

Docwagon99
Docwagon99Lv12

Amen

BlackMamba0024
BlackMamba0024Lv12

Thanks

BlackMamba0024
BlackMamba0024Lv12

Thanks

TheZ
TheZLv4

Thanks Mr.Tl-er.

naruto33gold
naruto33goldLv13

it would be great if the battling doesn't go on for so long

emrade
emradeLv4

Do you have a new review then?

Darkeast:OK, this Review is outdated
Mandiiyy
MandiiyyLv13

If he is not stupid mc then there is no other stupid mc in any novel i read. Because i find him the greatest stupid among all the stupid MC's I've ever seen.

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Feyr
FeyrLv5

Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review. SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.) Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters. Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same. Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating. Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too. Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway) World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher. The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

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VanjaLv14
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