Review Detail of WisH in

From Chapter 1 to Chapter 68~ The novel start off having the MC which is super unlucky and from the real world dying but at the last moment, he transmigrated into a world filled with superpowers which is gene ability and technology like virtual reality. Now in the new world, he would smack all the faces of bad people and become super op like how any MC out there currently. The story's direction is similar to novels like warlock of the magus world, wizard world and many more xianxia out there but the abilities and the power systems is what sets apart the novel with others. But of course, the MC must have a single super unique op ability just like the computer chip in WOTMW. Don't worry readers, what I have said here is not a spoiler really but something you expect when going into such novels and the synopsis have given it away so you can read this. I would give the novel story development 3.5 because the pace is not as slow and the MC is going somewhere and becoming better. Some of the flaws which causes it not reaching 4.0 or higher is because the story don't really have a purpose yet nor goal that is worthy for the MC to aim to have the strongest gene. Why can't he live his life quietly after being transmigrated but he must be strong for some reason? The villain is not as scary as he should be. In certain situations, the MC really did some unrealistic decisions such as showing his cards when he is still weak and while he did try to justify his decisions, the justification is not very compelling. Character design is for now only about the MC with some side characters that I care little to none. This is not a bad point as focusing on MC only is something I do enjoy reading but the side characters still need some more description such as how they look, personality and not just their age and family status. The MC is like the main foundation of the story while the side characters is like the bricks to the house. It feels like the SC is pebbles in the story and they are just non existent. The MC is the type that is meticulous and somewhat smart but with the power of OP ability, his plot armor thickens and that characteristics/personality is not fully explored. MC's history is somewhat explored but not fully.The villain is still quite weak so they are only face smacking targets. 3.3 star World Buildings is also average 3.0 as it is him staying in one place and not much about the world is describe, except that there is many uninhabited place that he can explore next time. MC went to a few locations already but the locations is not descriptive so hard to imagine it. At least the power systems is mentioned. Update Stability being average 3.0 as well since 10 Chapter is the norm for a novel translation Translation Quality is 4.8 stars for me because the translator is really doing a great job as I understand it how it should be and that I did not really get lost from the novel. An improvement can be distinguishing virtual and real world maybe? Add a bold line between the two world or some indication because sometime I wonder if the places he is are virtual or real sometimes. Overall, the novel is going to be interesting and enjoyable but I suggest reading it when 200+Chapters is out so that you can binge it.Good work Translator. 6666666 Overall score: 3.52 ( average)