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Bossun0910
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Lol, this is clearly edited mtl, I saw many indications because I'm an mtl reader. Like on top of my head when the translator mistaken "role" for "character", they both have same chinese character and seems like the "translator" missed that and didn't edit it. Another indication is whenever there were screams and howls they turned into "———!!", that there is because mtl usually ignore whatever it is before the ———, it should probably be like "Ahh———!!" or something like that, didn't check the raw so I could probably wrong about this. The most hilarious mistake was at chapter 37, there's one paragraph left unedited with mtl name Li Jie instead of Lize and Rod instead of Rhode and using the funny mtl grammar, and the cherry on top is a note by editor asking for this Winnie guy to check the paragraph and since the note still in the final product, it's obvious this Winnie guy didn't do his job. For the story though, it's one of the most interesting transported into game world webnovel I've read (at least until where I am), my only concern is author spend 20% of narratives to describing/glorifying mc, you don't need to repeat dozens of times that mc is strongest guild leader in past life.

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Summoning the Holy Sword

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RedLaw
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Interesting review. Are you still reading this story? What do you think about it?