Author this story is truly interesting. My only problem is the fact that you fail to describe the characters which is indeed annoying. The word beauty can't clarify how they look like. is it that hard to say the have either brown hair or green eyes something. Even skin tone. Bruh I can basically imagine them as any race I want. And like I always say; the readers aren't in your head. So they don't know what your thinking. So sometimes take our opinion into consideration.
Flying Alone
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