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FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv106yr
2018-01-22 21:34

Do you think this story like what I think? Well, if so I want to know if it true =_= Summary : Once upon a time, life a human that have an affinity with a beast or non human. He loves gold, silver, and shiny antique thingy. So he go around the world with his beast friends to search for treasure and in his adventure he met more beast and some human comrade. And then he became a legend.... If its like that, well, just waiting for an update^-^ /**. I made a camp here ☆◇☆

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DaoistWolf
DaoistWolfLv6

Treasure

MRF7760
MRF7760Lv6

👍🏻

purafyre
purafyreLv5

You gave it 5 stars without even reading it? You worthless piece of ****.

FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

Yes, I am. So what? The one that give star is me. Why I must give a **** about what other thinking about my choice? You are not my family, not my friend nor I know who you are... So why I must thinking about your choice?

FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

If you don't like what other think, Just go and eat your ****! 'Cause I don't give a **** to you!

purafyre:You gave it 5 stars without even reading it? You worthless piece of ****.
purafyre
purafyreLv5

Worthless. Piece. Of ****.

FOXFIRE92:Yes, I am. So what? The one that give star is me. Why I must give a **** about what other thinking about my choice? You are not my family, not my friend nor I know who you are... So why I must thinking about your choice?
purafyre
purafyreLv5

And because you posted your worthless opinion on a venue meant for describing books so that people can decide whether it's worth reading or not. That's called a review. And I am reviewing your opinion so that people can see what kind of a **** opinion you've given. If you were any less helpful you'd be a paid reviewer. At least there's a reason they post.

FOXFIRE92:Yes, I am. So what? The one that give star is me. Why I must give a **** about what other thinking about my choice? You are not my family, not my friend nor I know who you are... So why I must thinking about your choice?
FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

Iam proud to be worthless man in the world~ So what? Do you want to erase me? No you can't, why because YOU ARE WORTHLESS PIECE OF A GODDAMN SHIT!!! Why I thinking of you like that, cause you give a damn about 'me'. The one that you say are a worthless piece of ****. My mouth/hand is dirty? So what? I can just wash it~

purafyre:Worthless. Piece. Of ****.
FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

My reason to post it before, cause there isn't any chapter for my worthless opinion. I don't a damn about what other people thinking about this novel. Also why I post it, cause In the first place a venue is a place for people to write what they think about a novel. Not every one must write about a review I already read some people that just write every thing they want even if that isnt a review or have any meaning in the novel. Just like when WW and Qidian have a battle about translator novel or "where the heck I must read this novel, WW or Qidian?" Or "I already read it at WW, so why Qidian steal and post it in their place?" So did I do wrong cause my star? Every people have a choice do you think just because of one piece of my mind in a venue they read it or dont read it? Do you know how many people write in the venue? They may be dont read mine but other or they may just read mine and other. If they smart people they will thinking "Oh, this is just their opinion, so let's read what other opinion are!" Qnd if they dumb jusy because other people say this worthless piece of a story or this is just so greay story, they will think "Oh, this sound great. I just read it cause he/she say it (without read other people opinion)" If just because one piece of my mind they decide to read it then they the dumb adn worthless one. Why I must think about other if you alone isn't give a damn about your word that make other pessimis. If the one that you give a pice of a word in RL have a weak heart/have a trouble that they just want that end they might go end their life. You say Iam worthless, well I don't know why you just bully mine and not other. There so much that give a write like mine but you just chose mine. My theacher always say to me if you good to other then other will good to you. And if you bad to other other will be bad to you. Karma is real

purafyre:And because you posted your worthless opinion on a venue meant for describing books so that people can decide whether it's worth reading or not. That's called a review. And I am reviewing your opinion so that people can see what kind of a **** opinion you've given. If you were any less helpful you'd be a paid reviewer. At least there's a reason they post.
FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

I know you just want me to not do something like this. But can you give a word that sound reasonable and good so other will like that even if they wrong? Can you not do something that will hurt other people? I not a thing that don't have a heart. If what you say is true, then I will do that. Just can you please be more gentle with your word. Not every one is like you that will just say "you gave 5 star without read it? You a piece of a ****" every turn of comment they see not good for them... This isn't a place to you if you just write like that.

purafyre:And because you posted your worthless opinion on a venue meant for describing books so that people can decide whether it's worth reading or not. That's called a review. And I am reviewing your opinion so that people can see what kind of a **** opinion you've given. If you were any less helpful you'd be a paid reviewer. At least there's a reason they post.
FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

Not every one have a good heart. Some of them will just explode out of anger because of you. And you make me sick. Are you don't have any work to do so you come to me and other people just say something like worthless? Well I don't have one cause I don't have anything to do so I entertaiment you.

purafyre:And because you posted your worthless opinion on a venue meant for describing books so that people can decide whether it's worth reading or not. That's called a review. And I am reviewing your opinion so that people can see what kind of a **** opinion you've given. If you were any less helpful you'd be a paid reviewer. At least there's a reason they post.
purafyre
purafyreLv5

You're not the only one I yelled at.

FOXFIRE92:My reason to post it before, cause there isn't any chapter for my worthless opinion. I don't a damn about what other people thinking about this novel. Also why I post it, cause In the first place a venue is a place for people to write what they think about a novel. Not every one must write about a review I already read some people that just write every thing they want even if that isnt a review or have any meaning in the novel. Just like when WW and Qidian have a battle about translator novel or "where the heck I must read this novel, WW or Qidian?" Or "I already read it at WW, so why Qidian steal and post it in their place?" So did I do wrong cause my star? Every people have a choice do you think just because of one piece of my mind in a venue they read it or dont read it? Do you know how many people write in the venue? They may be dont read mine but other or they may just read mine and other. If they smart people they will thinking "Oh, this is just their opinion, so let's read what other opinion are!" Qnd if they dumb jusy because other people say this worthless piece of a story or this is just so greay story, they will think "Oh, this sound great. I just read it cause he/she say it (without read other people opinion)" If just because one piece of my mind they decide to read it then they the dumb adn worthless one. Why I must think about other if you alone isn't give a damn about your word that make other pessimis. If the one that you give a pice of a word in RL have a weak heart/have a trouble that they just want that end they might go end their life. You say Iam worthless, well I don't know why you just bully mine and not other. There so much that give a write like mine but you just chose mine. My theacher always say to me if you good to other then other will good to you. And if you bad to other other will be bad to you. Karma is real
FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

Ofcourse I know that~ I already look at what you do and whoelse you yelled at... I see that and other can also see that -_- Even before I post my first comment for you... =_=

purafyre:You're not the only one I yelled at.
FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

If not because of that why would I give you my precious time for my entertaiment... =_=

purafyre:You're not the only one I yelled at.
purafyre
purafyreLv5

You won't be the last one.

FOXFIRE92:If not because of that why would I give you my precious time for my entertaiment... =_=
FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

Of course~ Of course~ Just don't pick me next time~ ~(„ಡωಡ„)~

purafyre:You won't be the last one.
FOXFIRE92
FOXFIRE92Lv10

Aih~ You just speak nonsense with me... A one grade junior highschooler („ಡωಡ„)... Iam almost thinking that I can just jump grade to senior highschool~(„ಡωಡ„)

purafyre:You won't be the last one.
XeIo
XeIoLv4

nice review

PrinceNatawijaya
PrinceNatawijayaLv5

Atleast i can watch something worth in this review, war between piece of **** who fight to snatch each other piece of **** so they can be the one who eat that piece of **** oh my goodness they're really awesome!

HighHeavens
HighHeavensLv5

Yeah that's right ㄟ( ̄▽ ̄ㄟ) Ψ( ̄▽ ̄)Ψ

PrinceNatawijaya:Atleast i can watch something worth in this review, war between piece of **** who fight to snatch each other piece of **** so they can be the one who eat that piece of **** oh my goodness they're really awesome!
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