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Honestly, it's a great story. The worst part of it being the main character and the female lead. All of the side characters offer a different perspective to the narrative and the experiences of each varies. The plot was great. It gets a bit convoluted when it tries to explain science using big words, it takes them 3 big paragraphs to explain simple concepts and offers no ELI5, for example the simple gravity siphon, which could be explained with steam pump puts water in the high tower and then it falls to the tap. MC is the bringer of big knowledge from the future. He goes from being a lord only in name to a platoon commander, and gradually his forces grow so much that the later part of his story only have him reading reports of the battles a few months after due to distance. He grows to be hypocritical, being and idealist in feudal times of wars, switches between detrhoning and offering refugees jobs to forceful conscription as the story goes by. And most of all is how backwards he is when it comes to romance. The female lead, well I can only describe her personality as a wet mop. Aside from being described as a combat witch, who only maybe fights twice, she is mostly used as a soldering gun, and sometimes as a wall to bounce "novel" concepts with the MC using big words. Personality wise she is almost non existent. Which is a shame because she ends up with the MC. Literally even coach drivers that get 2 chapters have more in depth character and development than her. All things considered it's a good story, you get to see the growth in all the side characters and the town from border town to empire and the department ministers.

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