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Kaalev
KaalevLv37yr
2017-09-08 11:24

The story started great and is pretty funny. However, by now it's starting to get boring. MC needs some challenges and we need a proper story development. Instead we have: 1. MC that can knock out anyone despite their cultivation. 2. MC having no goals and doing random stuff just because he can. 3. Very brief characters. 4. Unknown world background. I'm aware this is meant to be a parody. But I'd prefer a parody with a good plot too.

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Guest199
Guest199Lv4

Its normal to have a start like in if situations like this happened in reality yeah, who the heck would know what to do right after he transported to another world lol. And from ur status its 64 so its still in the foundation stages for later development of the story. Would still be very unpredictable with how vague the hints for the future can be though.

Guest199
Guest199Lv4

Also....this is a parody? o_O

Kaalev
KaalevLv3

When I wrote the review 64 waa the latest chapter. There were some good development at around 90 chapter but then 10 chapters later it got back to where it was.

Guest199:Its normal to have a start like in if situations like this happened in reality yeah, who the heck would know what to do right after he transported to another world lol. And from ur status its 64 so its still in the foundation stages for later development of the story. Would still be very unpredictable with how vague the hints for the future can be though.
Kaalev
KaalevLv3

Yes, it's a parody on xianxia clitches.

Guest199:Also....this is a parody? o_O
Guest199
Guest199Lv4

Yeah, still gives the feeling of a novel just beggining even though 140+ chapters had passed (including the turning point where he goes to another continent). The characters in the new environment are still being introduced... think that the novel would be great once we pass the fore-play though. I hope that the climax would be satisfying.

Kaalev:When I wrote the review 64 waa the latest chapter. There were some good development at around 90 chapter but then 10 chapters later it got back to where it was.
Emporer_of_Time
Emporer_of_TimeLv4

I like it the way it is. There aren't too many areas in the novel where the mc is hurt too badly plus it's extremely funny. Like literally really funny. Some of the parts in this novel have me laughing out loud😄😅😅

hiddenwolf
hiddenwolfLv5

What wrong with that, the strongest system is an awesome novel

SilentTouch
SilentTouchLv5

I suggest that you make your own novel.😂

Seregosa
SeregosaLv6

I don't know if you realize that this is supposed to be a full-blown comedy where there's no serious parts at all. I mean, there's novels that are supposed to be like this, like this one. It's not supposed to have a deep plot or logic, it's just supposed to make you laugh with all the bizarre and ridiculous situations it provides. This novel does exactly what it's supposed to and does its job flawlessly. Trying to bring plot here is like trying to bring nonsensical comedy into the middle of a horror tragedy novel.

DevouringBlaze
DevouringBlazeLv5

I like this novel, because when I read this novel I want to laugh everyday

Hadrian
HadrianLv5

Indeed it tends to become boring after a while

Ultrazone
UltrazoneLv10

Tf bro read more it gets funny and interesting again

Soul_River
Soul_RiverLv15

Don't like it, don't read it!!!, this is just a comedy, not a full blown cultivation world like story.

shimazu
shimazuLv10

1. the motherf*cking human king lin fan can beat anyone with higher cultivation bases because he has the strongest system. 2. Ohh he has a goal and at least for now is to become the strongest by overthrowing the ancient race and establish the saint devil sect in the ancient saint world. 3. characters are indeed brief cos his potential is way too much and his supporting characters cant catch up...so most of the characters last mostly for an arc but im sure we will see them again. 4. There is some info about the xuanhuang world spread about in the 400 chapters but since as u said this is a parody...i guess it okay The novel is extremely funny, one of the funniest i have read especially after he ascends to the ancient saint world.

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