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AnonCommander
AnonCommanderLv57yr
2017-07-08 20:46

Okay look. The writing style and interactions between characters are fine. But the way every single person continues to stroke the main character's c*ck is ridiculous. "How a loser bacame a prince charming". Lets talk about that. He didn't become anything. He literally woke up as handsome dude. He didn't die and get sent back in time, more like he went to a damn different timeline altogether. Similar but with him already a "school hunk" and that's just bull****. We dont see a gradual shift form lose to prince charming, we see a prince charming become even more likeable because of reasons. Like what the hell? I dont hate the story. Other than the characters being shallow and praising the main character at every turn, its fine. Its just that over twenty chapters in there is still no REAL plot developement. I would not really recommend this to anyone because of the lacking character design, but for just a light read that you shouldn't take too seriously? Its good enough for that. Dont expect anything other than a superficial harem of adoring fans for the MC who exist to just make him look good though. If you can withstand all the aforementioned c*ck-stroking then give this a try.

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09sora09
09sora09Lv5

LoL

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Jenny
JennyLv5

You haven't read any chapters yet though??

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AnonCommander
AnonCommanderLv5

well obviously i didn't know of that function though right? I read up to chapter 30-something currently but that review still stands, i doubt the author suddenly got better at it in what little chapters we have. I merely got tired of how the very title didn;t really fit the contents of the novel, and the c*ck-stroking of the MC i mentioned. Still, other than that its decent enough. It get any better? I assume either you haven't read it yet or have caught up to it and coincidentally saw this review.

Jenny:You haven't read any chapters yet though??
Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15

Hmmm. Maybe I'll just pretend that I'm the Mc and the c*ck-stroking is all for me XD

AnonCommander:well obviously i didn't know of that function though right? I read up to chapter 30-something currently but that review still stands, i doubt the author suddenly got better at it in what little chapters we have. I merely got tired of how the very title didn;t really fit the contents of the novel, and the c*ck-stroking of the MC i mentioned. Still, other than that its decent enough. It get any better? I assume either you haven't read it yet or have caught up to it and coincidentally saw this review.
LetMeSleep
LetMeSleepLv5

After the first handful of chapters, it turned out really good soon

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Emayza
EmayzaLv4

The story is fine but I can't get over the novel title. This is the most embrassing novel title I've ever seen so far.

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TheWillOfDEEK
TheWillOfDEEKLv4

hmm .. it shouldnt be that bad ..

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GreatApeGogetaSS4
GreatApeGogetaSS4Lv14

I guess that's the reason everyone is reading this for then.

Jack_N_Mikhail:Hmmm. Maybe I'll just pretend that I'm the Mc and the c*ck-stroking is all for me XD
shelwyn
shelwynLv15

Good review lol

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Pamel
PamelLv10

Its get better in the recent stories

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AnonCommander
AnonCommanderLv5

really? i dont know, i read other reviews on NU and it indicates that the romance aspect is really lacking...like even the main girl isn't really wooed much, i think it said. But if if you really say it gets better than i think i'll continue it after a bit more chapters pile up--i can read this much in a day or two lol. Maybe i can update my own review too? Or i wonder if i'll have to make a new one...

Pamel:Its get better in the recent stories
Pamel
PamelLv10

Rather say that not wooing much, i think the feeling deepens with time and how funny and sincere MC show to the girl. Also its story mainly focus on his career as he want to be a great accountant but mush have parttime jobs as model

AnonCommander:really? i dont know, i read other reviews on NU and it indicates that the romance aspect is really lacking...like even the main girl isn't really wooed much, i think it said. But if if you really say it gets better than i think i'll continue it after a bit more chapters pile up--i can read this much in a day or two lol. Maybe i can update my own review too? Or i wonder if i'll have to make a new one...
Matsuna
MatsunaLv13

This novel is good good

Miruki
MirukiLv11

ah nu, i've recently read some of the reviews there. I must say that they are quite irresponsible with it. Some are even claiming it has no romance at all but if you read the latter chapter it is clear as day that there is. Maybe they're salty cause MC cant get the girl as fast as wuxia/xianxia genres.

AnonCommander:really? i dont know, i read other reviews on NU and it indicates that the romance aspect is really lacking...like even the main girl isn't really wooed much, i think it said. But if if you really say it gets better than i think i'll continue it after a bit more chapters pile up--i can read this much in a day or two lol. Maybe i can update my own review too? Or i wonder if i'll have to make a new one...
FanWei
FanWeiLv11

The MC just wake up hansome, nothing about being a loser. The tiltle is a lie but the story is still good to read lightly.

Frosch
FroschLv4

Ikr. "Hey man whatcha reading?" F_ck if I'm gonna say the title

Emayza:The story is fine but I can't get over the novel title. This is the most embrassing novel title I've ever seen so far.
Novel_Lover
Novel_LoverLv10

Right, this novel is so damn boring

Archry
ArchryLv5

This novel is great

SHAF
SHAFLv4

Can I take the liberty in asking this Miss... if u know about any modern wooing

Miruki:ah nu, i've recently read some of the reviews there. I must say that they are quite irresponsible with it. Some are even claiming it has no romance at all but if you read the latter chapter it is clear as day that there is. Maybe they're salty cause MC cant get the girl as fast as wuxia/xianxia genres.
littlenita
littlenitaLv14

The story is actually pretty interesting I like the fact that the MC is completely dedicated to his girlfriend. He doesn’t let a little success get to his head, he honestly and sincerely pursues his dreams and what he feels is right.

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DaoistEndlessDream
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Zayah
ZayahLv15

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