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Review Detail of DaoistEndlessDream in Rebirth: How A Loser Became A Prince Charming

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DaoistEndlessDream
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I deleted this from my library after reading 20 chapters of this. I would first like to start off by saying that this novel is plain wish fulfillment. That by itself isn't the problem, although there are many cases of wish fulfillment done right, this novel does it wrong, at the very least in my opinion. First of all, the whole premise of traveling back in time and gaining a super awesome body that is hotter than a model is just mind blowing. While I understand that time travel is a big stretch, but the new divine body that he gains just throws logic out of the window. It doesn't make for a very good story if the MC has everything handed to him. I like OP Xianxia because the MC at the very least has a semblance of working hard to get what they want (most of the time (emperor's domination). This just feels like wish fulfillment on a whole other level. It's to the point of disgust. I would rather the MC reincarnate into his true past (fat) body, but work hard to lose weight and become a handsome and model like MC, rather than having the body of a demigod appear out of thin air. I personally think that this makes the novel seem like they're pulling bs out of thin air. Second of all his personality. The MC is dead as a person. He has no flaws is perfect in everything. Perfect memory when it suits him, dance skill coming out of his ass, just plain bs like rainbows sprung from a unicorns feces. When the MC is so perfect without any effort, that kills my care for that character entirely. Like I previously stated, I want the MC to at least work for the skills and powers he gets, even if I know they will eventually master it (let's be honest). This MC is just dead on the start, no character development, no real setbacks, no real progress. Honestly this just feels like the author decided to self insert himself into a fabrication of reality and start God-modding, aka acting as a god to manipulate the story in order to suit his desires and needs in order to play out a certain fantasy or story. Finally, there feels like no real action or *******. The suspense created sucks. The MC is so infallible that I don't even have to worried at the slightest. The MC's OPness is badly managed. He has no real reason for getting all these skills and OPness, but still has them and wins every situation in his favor no matter what. Good OP characters like Saitama from One Punch Man and arguably Li Qiye from Emperors Domination. One Punch Man is interesting because it gives a very good story and concept, that the MC is so OP that he is bored of being OP. For Emperors Domination, the real hook of the story, in my opinion, is the World Building and Curbstomp Action. The author of ED does a fantastic job of created a fantastical world that has wonders to be explored and secrets to be uncovered and also has some good crubstomping from our favorite OP MC Li Qiye. The MC of this Novel doesn't do that. He lives in the modern world with no real appeal. I don't know if the story gets better after 20 chapters, but from these few chapters, I have given up hope. If you've actually read the entire review good for you, and if you do read past chapter 20, let me know how it goes. Who knows maybe by chapter 150, the story might turn into something else and possibly something better, but my journey ends here. I hope this helped some of you.

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Rebirth: How A Loser Became A Prince Charming

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DaoistEndlessDream
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Why is the word ******* started out??? Lmao

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DaoistEndlessDream
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This is hilarious the word ten sion is blurred out.

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VenerateSamsara
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the part with the rainbow light comin out of unicorn feces got me so badly hahaha i couldnt stop laughing made my day thumbs up to u kind sir 🤣

SirBothersome12
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So does the novel get better later on or what? How come no one commented about it getting better... Just point on your review alone made not want to read it but than again i see some comments about it getting better later on which has me conflicted about wether to start reading it or not. Hmm how troublesome...

Bae_Suzy
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same i dont want to waste my time reading some boring ass novel

PJCG
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Tension

PJCG
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Lies. The word "*******" isn't blurted out

DaoistEndlessDream:This is hilarious the word ten sion is blurred out.
Upsatebug4
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This is even more hilarious 😆

PJCG:Lies. The word "*******" isn't blurted out
Upsatebug4
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This is even more hilarious 😆

PJCG:Lies. The word "*******" isn't blurted out
PJCG
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So that's how the censoring works. You have to wait a few days 🤔

Upsatebug4:This is even more hilarious 😆
Upsatebug4
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Maybe Or maybe it’s the way you write it? It once censored A*****ww I was dumbfounded! How it that something you censor! It also once censored free*dom Now that was funny I don’t understand how the censoring program works it surely has some bugs

PJCG:So that's how the censoring works. You have to wait a few days 🤔
PJCG
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True, but I've been in WB for almost a year this is the first time I've been censored. And believe me I swear a lot.

Upsatebug4:Maybe Or maybe it’s the way you write it? It once censored A*****ww I was dumbfounded! How it that something you censor! It also once censored free*dom Now that was funny I don’t understand how the censoring program works it surely has some bugs
Upsatebug4
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Well I’ve been thin WB for only a couple of months and I don’t even swear but I’ve been censored many MANY times curious,isn’t it?

PJCG:True, but I've been in WB for almost a year this is the first time I've been censored. And believe me I swear a lot.
PJCG
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Indeed 🕵️

Upsatebug4:Well I’ve been thin WB for only a couple of months and I don’t even swear but I’ve been censored many MANY times curious,isn’t it?
TinyRustyPanda
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Tension ******* ******* TeNsIoN

PJCG:Lies. The word "*******" isn't blurted out
TinyRustyPanda
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Tension ******* ******* TeNsIoN it only censors when not capitalized

TinyRustyPanda:Tension ******* ******* TeNsIoN
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Daoistblank
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Same

SirBothersome12:So does the novel get better later on or what? How come no one commented about it getting better... Just point on your review alone made not want to read it but than again i see some comments about it getting better later on which has me conflicted about wether to start reading it or not. Hmm how troublesome...