Review Detail of DauntingDoubts in The Devil's Cage

The story in general is very good, no obvious grammar mistakes in all of the chapters and overall good writing quality. Each dungeon world is very unique and has great backgrounds. I do think the ending was a bit rushed though. Spoiler! The only flaw I think is switching the gender of some characters, for example the guy/girl in the final dungeon world and Starbeck. because, like, why? they were finely written characters and just because they had a few 'feminine' traits you didn't have to change their gender at all.