Review Detail of Jonathan_Rockett in The Ultimate Evolution

Made it to Chapter 16 before I dropped it. in the first "world" there were so many grammatical inconsistencies, it was unreadable. It's like the author refused to do any research about weapons or fighting that it makes it laughable. I thought after the reader comments the author would notice and fix his mistakes, but it didn't happen. Imagine getting a 12 year old to describe how a gun works, congrats you've read the first arc.