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deikatsuo
deikatsuoLv67yr
2017-11-27 14:33

Not recommended, the MC are stupid + arrogant Just reading alone makes you feel like a duck sitting on the fence TQ: 3/5 US: 3/5 SD: 2/5 CD: 1/5 WB: 3/5 Total Score: 2.4

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deikatsuo
deikatsuoLv6

This quote is a part of ch.10 ___________________ "Grandmaster, I am so sorry. I did not do this on purpose," remorsefulness could be clearly seen in her glistening eyes. She gently nudged over and bowed deeply. "It seems that you have been watching me for a very long time. Has nobody taught you that watching someone practice is very immoral?" Ling Xian sneered, he carefully checked out the woman who was not far from him. Her beauty stunned him for a few seconds. Her complexion was glowing, her brows were like a painting and thousands of strands of black hair poured down her back like silk. Her cyan colored palace gown wrapped around her graceful figure perfectly. Like a pistia floating in water, her movements were serene, and her expression was demure and dazzling. Identifying her age was difficult. Based on her facial features and her body language, she could not be older than 16. However, her temperament also gave off an aura of someone who experienced strong wind and heavy rain. There was a sense of sophistication that could only be found on someone who took the time to blossom and mature. She was charming and extraordinary, elegant and noble. "I… Grandmaster you did not cast any spells to conceal yourself. I was careless and too fixated on the way you practiced," Lin Qing Yi apologized. She was a little surprised, as the voice that spoke sounded very much like a young boy. She denied that thought immediately. It was not possible. A young boy would not have such a profound understanding of alchemy. Based on her estimation, the man underneath the hat should be an elderly who had lived for more than a century but unfortunately had the voice of a young man. "You mean… it was my fault?" Ling Xian frowned. "Grandmaster you have misunderstood. That is not what Qing Yi meant," Lin Qing Yi stood tall and straight, like a Goddess who just descended from the Heavens and landed on Earth~~~~~~~~ ##Skip## ~~~~~~~If he did not notice that she had eighth level Qi, he would’ve stepped up and punched her. To be interrupted while he was collecting the Dan, even if it was unintentional, was unforgivable.

Lightwind21
Lightwind21Lv4

so fucking what? he should kill everyone around him ? or punch some retard girls in the face ?, it`s always more smart to look for new friends then enemies. (or at least not make more)

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