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Nou
NouTranslator7yr
2017-10-07 14:28

Lets see. How to write a review... Ah Translator-san and Editor-san, you guys are amazing! The translation is great, the story is moving along nicely! However, I have some things I want to point out: You guys are extremely slow! If not for the awesomeness of your editor, I would rate you guys 2 out of 5 stars! Every other novels on webnovel has like, 200 chapters a day, but you guys? It takes years to get anything out! And then how dare you decrease your translation amount due to real life issues? Come on, keep up with the times! Then, the character design: how does a 10-year-old boy out drink a plump Taoist who constantly indulges in worldly pleasures? Most, if not all, of the characters are flat. You have the mischievous boy who plays by no one's rules but his own. There's the cold but aloof beauty. There's the beauty that's out to kill him. There's the handsome--but single-minded--guy who's against our MC. MC has a loyal dog---ahem--sidekick, who is there for comedic relief. When will they grow (personality wise)? I guess I should be thanking that our MC isn't a cultivation freak who sits in one place for 15 years to cultivate *cough*Wang Lin*cough*. Then, everyone's constantly howling. They're secretly werewolves in human skin, I tell you. Even that deadly Python Toad is no exception. The world is like any other "cultivating" worlds out there. There's a level structure that these worlds can't seem to escape. There's also a sect, and the sect hands out missions. People fly on swords and tries to earn cultivation resources. I guess it can't be help though, since you'll want to sell what works. I'll even bet $10 bucks that there will be a tournament arc. And then there will be "world-shaking" beauties with skins "as smooth as jade" and as "soft as silk". It's too bad you won't be able to bet with me. :P The story is great though! Our MC takes us off the conventional path. He doesn't behead everyone in sight, and he doesn't become the white knight either. Instead, he treads more by the twilight, pushing and pulling when needed to accomplish what he wants (doesn't care too much for the thoughts and opinions of others). My favorite part was when he decides to run with his fat friend, for no reason other than "you're suppose to run after you do something bad." I actually LMAO'd that time! So far, I hope the story keeps developing as to how it currently is. I don't want him to get any quick power ups, as it'll detract from the one thing that distinguishes this story apart from other cultivating novels. But, thank you very much, sir editor for taking your time to review this novel! :P Hi Myriea. I love your kid's picture. Makes me smile when I see him.

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holachica
holachicaLv4

wait but what about the pinyins?

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Nou
NouTranslator

Ah, pinyins are used in this story too! Like how many a translators retain the word "Qi" as "Qi' and don't translate it as "life force", this translator retains some words of some locations, names, and forms of addresses (e.g. shixiong, shidi, shimei, etc). Overall, I don't think it's enough to ruin a story, but your miles may vary depending on your grasp of these terms—I say so because many people have dropped it due to the prevalence of pinyin used in this story.

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INR
INRLv5

Eh!!!!!

Ame_no_Murakumo
Ame_no_MurakumoLv4

[CONTAIN SPOILER, MAYBE...] Editor-san, can you ask the translator in what chapter Fang Xin meet again with Xiao Mahn after she got away with Fuyou Palace (IIRC), I want to read that part ahead in RAW... Thanks...

Nou
NouTranslator

Unfortunately, I, too, am up to date with the latest chapter that you're up to date with. I'm slow. XD

Ame_no_Murakumo:[CONTAIN SPOILER, MAYBE...] Editor-san, can you ask the translator in what chapter Fang Xin meet again with Xiao Mahn after she got away with Fuyou Palace (IIRC), I want to read that part ahead in RAW... Thanks...
Ame_no_Murakumo
Ame_no_MurakumoLv4

LOL... I had read ahead but still didnt found chapter which Fang Xin Meet Xiao Mahn again, but I want to know so much... finally I gave up searching myself and ended up asking, but alas... T.T

Nou:Unfortunately, I, too, am up to date with the latest chapter that you're up to date with. I'm slow. XD
Octav
OctavLv11

Already find it? Tell me quick

Ame_no_Murakumo:LOL... I had read ahead but still didnt found chapter which Fang Xin Meet Xiao Mahn again, but I want to know so much... finally I gave up searching myself and ended up asking, but alas... T.T
Sromon
SromonLv3

Best example of review ever!!! 😂😂😂

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