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NATavailablE
NATavailablELv76yr
2018-01-09 20:11

The first novel i read without old grandpa , reincarnation , system , op cultivation technique , op weapon , tournament , spacial ring/ bag , sect , harem hoarding mc , no bull**** infinite years secluded meditation , clone/avatar This novel is really great it gives me fresh exp with right amount of comedy ,seriousness , drama and a very fitting iron lady to be the main female lead Plus the most important factor is I LOVE YOU LOULAN!!!!!!!!!!!

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jundullah
jundullahLv3

Hoi ! Get ur ass cool down! How far you reading progress? Tell me a little about this novel. It not I won't read, just I should or not read because current chapter was 500+. Thanks buddy

NATavailablE
NATavailablELv7

Im up to date bud that review is out dated look carefully

jundullah:Hoi ! Get ur ass cool down! How far you reading progress? Tell me a little about this novel. It not I won't read, just I should or not read because current chapter was 500+. Thanks buddy
NATavailablE
NATavailablELv7

This novel is not for new ones in my opinion bec avalon tackles what other novel is scared of doing Mc of this novel is one mass of hardwork and doesnt even have a decent plot armor

jundullah:Hoi ! Get ur ass cool down! How far you reading progress? Tell me a little about this novel. It not I won't read, just I should or not read because current chapter was 500+. Thanks buddy
NATavailablE
NATavailablELv7

Bro this novel is for people who wants too feel refresh in reading xuanhuan novels so if you read a lot of other novels with almost the same plot and gotten tired this one is for you

jundullah:Hoi ! Get ur ass cool down! How far you reading progress? Tell me a little about this novel. It not I won't read, just I should or not read because current chapter was 500+. Thanks buddy
jundullah
jundullahLv3

Thanks for saving my life ! *Sweat

NATavailablE:Bro this novel is for people who wants too feel refresh in reading xuanhuan novels so if you read a lot of other novels with almost the same plot and gotten tired this one is for you
Burguul
BurguulLv3

Thumbs up because of Lou Lan. NO, STOP IT, I'M NOT GIVING YOU MY SOUP! SCRAM!

Tirant_Papeix
Tirant_PapeixLv5

Thanks for the review i discovered this gem. I was a little tired of the reincarnation and revenge + harem stories all over

SauceMaster64
SauceMaster64Lv6

How many old grandpa novels are there? I only know two, which are BTTH and Coiling Dragon. Maybe WDQK, idk.

true_evil_god
true_evil_godLv11

Really, nothing of that? So all the people are just meh at foundation building level one? Why would people want to read xuanhuan novel like this. If one want to read realistic, nothing is realistic in xuanhuan all of it is ridiculous. Only a dumbass write realistic xuanhuan novel. I should just read jack reacher novel. Its realistic but supremely badass.

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Milkshake
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