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Lzsd80
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The author is to inconsistent and honestly he's just not very good. This story is littered with so many instances that just make you roll your eyes and wonder if the author has ever had any interaction with living beings because the scenarios he comes up with the actions of the people in this novel are simply unrealistic. The hardest part was getting through the firs 110+ chapters because it felt like I was reading a novel written by a child. That or he is a closet pedophile.

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Castle of Black Iron

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RenegadeSage17
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Could you be a bit clearer and make some examples? The fact that interactions between people not going the way you think may as well be due to the setting itself.

Nasedra
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Or the fact that every women is glad to **** him. Every man is jealous. Every enemy treats him as there greastest threat and the proceed to ignor him

SilentMild
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Beater52
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Could u explain in detail bcuz it feels like ure jeoulose cos u dont know how to write a novel or ure jeoulose bcuz this is popular but u aint

Lzsd80
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I have seen some stupid comments but, yours is right up there with the greats! Especially with your grammatical ability of a 5 year old! I can only guess you and the author are Pedo brothers in arms so you find the need to try and justify their crappy, writing with a pathetic attempt to be clever. If your going to try and be clever at the very least learn to spell.

Beater52:Could u explain in detail bcuz it feels like ure jeoulose cos u dont know how to write a novel or ure jeoulose bcuz this is popular but u aint
Beater52
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Oh u only know how to insult people? Guess ure not worth paying attention the and im from japan that's why my englis is bad try learning other language if ure such a genius

Lzsd80:I have seen some stupid comments but, yours is right up there with the greats! Especially with your grammatical ability of a 5 year old! I can only guess you and the author are Pedo brothers in arms so you find the need to try and justify their crappy, writing with a pathetic attempt to be clever. If your going to try and be clever at the very least learn to spell.
Lzsd80
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You really are an idiot. You reply to my comment with a pathetic attempt to insult me and the moment I turn it back on you instead you turn into a little pussy? Try learning another language? You don't know me because if you did you would realize how much of an idiot you are. I happen to be Bilingual! Pendejo!

Beater52:Oh u only know how to insult people? Guess ure not worth paying attention the and im from japan that's why my englis is bad try learning other language if ure such a genius
Keehaz
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You're

Lzsd80:I have seen some stupid comments but, yours is right up there with the greats! Especially with your grammatical ability of a 5 year old! I can only guess you and the author are Pedo brothers in arms so you find the need to try and justify their crappy, writing with a pathetic attempt to be clever. If your going to try and be clever at the very least learn to spell.
Lzsd80
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Sorry but, "You're" doesn't fit into the context of the sentences structure. The "yours" in this case is referring to their comment itself and not the individual so "You're" doesn't work here. Nice try though...

Keehaz:You're
Keehaz
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I was referring to the "your" at the end of the comment.

Lzsd80:Sorry but, "You're" doesn't fit into the context of the sentences structure. The "yours" in this case is referring to their comment itself and not the individual so "You're" doesn't work here. Nice try though...
Earthshaker34
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HAHA YOU GOT HIM :D

Keehaz:I was referring to the "your" at the end of the comment.
Earthshaker34
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Well, you didn't answer two questions asked prior to your rage. So can you enlighten me as to what aspects of the novel you found childish?

Lzsd80:You really are an idiot. You reply to my comment with a pathetic attempt to insult me and the moment I turn it back on you instead you turn into a little pussy? Try learning another language? You don't know me because if you did you would realize how much of an idiot you are. I happen to be Bilingual! Pendejo!
Earthshaker34
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And what has "closet pedophile" got to do with anything? Stop insulting others. You have personally made many mistakes so you are not fit to judge others.

Lzsd80
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Is that you Jerry Sandusky?

Earthshaker34:And what has "closet pedophile" got to do with anything? Stop insulting others. You have personally made many mistakes so you are not fit to judge others.
Earthshaker34
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Ignoring questions huh...

Lzsd80:Is that you Jerry Sandusky?
Lzsd80
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What questions are there to answer moron? Did you even remember what you wrote? Whats a dumbass! I get it. You like touching little boys and girls and you found yourself excited reading this books early chapters. You weren't sure why but, anytime they talked about the little boys you got excited right? Now because you feel you relate to the authors love for little boys you get offended. Am I right? LMAO!!

Earthshaker34:Ignoring questions huh...
Earthshaker34
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Wow, you were born an imbecile. I am talking about the very first question that was asked in this comment section that you ignored because you have no idea how to answer. You judge others by their grammar yet you yourself have made stupid mistakes over and over again and just because I didnt curse at you doesnt mean that I dont know how to. Get your pedophiliac head out of your fucking arse and use your fucking head for something other than being a ****ty cunt who cant do anything other than flame others.

Lzsd80:What questions are there to answer moron? Did you even remember what you wrote? Whats a dumbass! I get it. You like touching little boys and girls and you found yourself excited reading this books early chapters. You weren't sure why but, anytime they talked about the little boys you got excited right? Now because you feel you relate to the authors love for little boys you get offended. Am I right? LMAO!!
Lzsd80
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I get it. Having someone point out that you like touching little boys is hard to swallow for you. Then again as long as it has to do with little boys you probably don't mind swallowing....

Earthshaker34:Wow, you were born an imbecile. I am talking about the very first question that was asked in this comment section that you ignored because you have no idea how to answer. You judge others by their grammar yet you yourself have made stupid mistakes over and over again and just because I didnt curse at you doesnt mean that I dont know how to. Get your pedophiliac head out of your fucking arse and use your fucking head for something other than being a ****ty cunt who cant do anything other than flame others.
Earthshaker34
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Are you possessed by cthulhu? Because the way you act dilusional seems to be straight out of lovecraft. Get out of here with your smartass brain. Fucking pedophile. Fucking retard.

Lzsd80:I get it. Having someone point out that you like touching little boys is hard to swallow for you. Then again as long as it has to do with little boys you probably don't mind swallowing....