Item: Castle of Black Iron
Rating: 2.6
Author: WidestGrin

WidestGrinLv67yr

2017-08-26 01:26

Though I did get a warning in the summary about this story being mature.....I found it plainly disgusting to read as it went a little too much into detail......I don't mind mature books but this one just turned me off in th first few chapters.

Castle of Black Iron

Drunk Tiger

4.1

2015 Chs

Liked by 40 people

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PureSeaLv10

😅 how does going into details turn you off?

7yr

WidestGrinLv6

Well........ for one: The book feels nothing more than some kind of masturbatory diary. Two: Girls like me don't really want to know the detailed thoughts of boys. Originally the book was supposed to be about a young guy who is trying to live and become stronger in a steampunk setting.

7yr

FlaffyLv4

Hmm I am going to give it a try, I'm thinking maybe I can skip/overlook those things since this novel does seem to have some success. I mean I usually don't like MC to have a FL just cause they get annoying, but I am not sure how I will feel about this. On second thought I'll save it for later when I'm too bored to care :D

7yr

HansTheCoolLv5

Hahaha

6yr

cdtppyLv4

You will , once you reach a certain age. Well, i havent read the novel yet, but i still prefer lots of *** over the stupid almost platonic harems out there.

WidestGrin:Well........ for one: The book feels nothing more than some kind of masturbatory diary. Two: Girls like me don't really want to know the detailed thoughts of boys. Originally the book was supposed to be about a young guy who is trying to live and become stronger in a steampunk setting.

6yr

WidestGrinLv6

I don't mind mature novels. This one just didn't sit well with me.

cdtppy:You will , once you reach a certain age. Well, i havent read the novel yet, but i still prefer lots of *** over the stupid almost platonic harems out there.

6yr

cdtppyLv4

Yeah, reading it i find it not so mature as i thought. I mean, yea **** boys are really perverted and s.ex driven, but the author focuses too much on that.

WidestGrin:I don't mind mature novels. This one just didn't sit well with me.

6yr

cdtppyLv4

It even censours t.een wtf :))

cdtppy:Yeah, reading it i find it not so mature as i thought. I mean, yea **** boys are really perverted and s.ex driven, but the author focuses too much on that.

6yr

WidestGrinLv6

😂😂all the wrong things are censored in this comment....

cdtppy:Yeah, reading it i find it not so mature as i thought. I mean, yea **** boys are really perverted and s.ex driven, but the author focuses too much on that.

6yr

in_jail_out_soonLv11

I'm also a girl and kinda hesitating if whether should I try it. Like you I don't also like those things.

6yr

Daoist_VaineLv12

Then go read the god of slaughter where the mc just goes and kills and fu.cks for the first 100 chappies or some where around there .... Is it cause monogamy is the thing ya know its like in right now but legend of the supreme soldier it is truly monogamous. But the harem setting IS being over used but at the same time. If done right harem over mono there has to be balance between the c's or its **** yaaaaahhh also it really is a good read if you can ger over him ***ing like 88 women or around there they have holy wars

6yr

WidestGrinLv6

I did read both of them.... god of slaughter is fine as long as you take out the indecent stuff. Supreme soldier is really good though...

Daoist_Vaine:Then go read the god of slaughter where the mc just goes and kills and fu.cks for the first 100 chappies or some where around there .... Is it cause monogamy is the thing ya know its like in right now but legend of the supreme soldier it is truly monogamous. But the harem setting IS being over used but at the same time. If done right harem over mono there has to be balance between the c's or its **** yaaaaahhh also it really is a good read if you can ger over him ***ing like 88 women or around there they have holy wars

6yr

Daoist_VaineLv12

Thats good have a great exp

WidestGrin:I did read both of them.... god of slaughter is fine as long as you take out the indecent stuff. Supreme soldier is really good though...

6yr

LazyFujoshiLv6

Don't try it the author and the mc are perverts, that only think of ***. The mc is just too lusty and it annoying.

Flaffy:Hmm I am going to give it a try, I'm thinking maybe I can skip/overlook those things since this novel does seem to have some success. I mean I usually don't like MC to have a FL just cause they get annoying, but I am not sure how I will feel about this. On second thought I'll save it for later when I'm too bored to care :D

6yr

Enlightened_BeingLv6

the MC and the Author should be in Jail, they are both twisted person and a *** addict, I tried giving a shot and got turn off at chapter 315 when he forcefully hugs a woman and stick like a leech and won't let go of her and she clearly doesn't agree and tried to get away, he jumps to every woman he likes and he got so many girls and f*** every girl he likes, he is like those creepy old men who manipulate little girls.

6yr

Enlightened_BeingLv6

also, I report this novel, this shouldn't be here.

6yr

WidestGrinLv6

Oh My! What's the author doing Here? Gyahhhh!!!!!

Enlightened_Being:the MC and the Author should be in Jail, they are both twisted person and a *** addict, I tried giving a shot and got turn off at chapter 315 when he forcefully hugs a woman and stick like a leech and won't let go of her and she clearly doesn't agree and tried to get away, he jumps to every woman he likes and he got so many girls and f*** every girl he likes, he is like those creepy old men who manipulate little girls.

6yr

HuhueLv10

Hey how bad is it? Im fine with sexual stuff but if its the usual horny **** approach I'd rather skip this

WidestGrin:I don't mind mature novels. This one just didn't sit well with me.

6yr

WidestGrinLv6

Bad in the sense that you know all the thoughts that the MC has when he is aroused.

Huhue:Hey how bad is it? Im fine with sexual stuff but if its the usual horny **** approach I'd rather skip this

6yr

johncagzLv6

P vv

cdtppy:You will , once you reach a certain age. Well, i havent read the novel yet, but i still prefer lots of *** over the stupid almost platonic harems out there.

6yr

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