Review Detail of pfoley in Soaring of Galaxia

I have no real issues with the translation or stability of update; they're fairly standard. The issues I have are with the parts put in place by the original author. The MC is supposed to care deeply for his new family, but neglects them until he is forced to pay attention. The world has a impossibly large population given how frequently people die, and how small families are. Everyone up to chapter 73 is evil or a coward (or both) beyond a handful of people. Oh, and there is a lot of repetitive padding in the writing, definitely a "paid by the word" author.