Review Detail of Momengah1 in Soaring of Galaxia

I thought that this story had some potential so I gave it a go. Managed to struggle to the middle of Chapter 12 before giving up. Main reasons for this 1) Stupid names for moves that make no sense and do not keep with the theme. 2) Power system is all mangled up and illogical. The MC struggles to power up and relearn things he had already learnt in his previous world. Why does it take so long to do something you already understand? Makes no sense. 3) Translation quality and editing could use some work. While I am not someone who normally complains, the some sentences leaves me wondering if I am trying to decipher a scrambled code. 4) Minor complaint - the story obviously was published on other platforms as it was not optimised for WN, in that it has font codes that are not deleted still in the chapters.