Review Detail of LordBlackshire in Immortal Mortal

I agree, as a writer (Using this account) I understand that sometimes the story can become a life of its own, but as the author of that story you need to take control of it. This writer seems immature and lacks a sense of confidence in his story(ies) so he forces development through conflict and then resolves said conflict with a strong coat of plot armor. He also lacks and real character growth and development via the protagonist even though said protagonist has had multiple life experiences that would dictate said growth. Lastly he forgets to end the arc and segway into the new one leaving so many loose ends only to respond to them at a later time in the story that makes the resolution completely lacking any quality to it.