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DoaistBoo
DoaistBooLv46yrDoaistBoo

I really can not take this novel anymore. It started of interesting with a good premise, but after the protagonist became a wordy immortal it went to hell. Pros: -Good start -Not bad world background -Acceptable yet very quick translation Cons: -Repetitive (Every arc the same things happen like how he somehow becomes in charge of the new settinghe goes to like as a commander (Later Starland, etc.), even though he has no substantial qualification) -Like most authors in quidian this novel is forgetful, as sooner or later all side characters get ditched (Literally other than a re birthed love interest, there are no characters from the past) -Plotholes galore (I'm not gonna go to deep into, but things that are clearly very difficult and take the protagonists new reincarnation planet thousands of years are done easily by random people the protagonist meets. E.g. The original continent has only true gods after millions upon millions of people in thousands of years, yet some random guy that was the only cultivator in a random plant became an earth immortal. It's so inconsistent and this is just one of the minor plot holes) Overall, this is just another poorly written xianxia with irrational characters (Million year old grand emperor has the logic of a silk pants), bad writting (It's literally more Repetitive than Shakespeare , a guy who wrote the same novel every 4 weeks) , and just is a waste of time because the protagonist will clearly fall into a lope. It does have some touching moments, but it's all turned to dust because of the authors lack of skill. P.S. the lazt straw on the camels back for me was when there were hints of their being powerful immortals emerging from Earth. This is total bs because what are the chances of them coming upon lightning as well for the miridian cultivation. Let alone somehow create a path as heaven defyingly lucky as the mc, with a small population in a destute planet. (I can currently make this assumption because the author showed in a recent chapter that the girl the betrayed the mc was beautiful after 200 years and some immortal reverend has earth language(Which if the authors says is because of luck it would be even more bs).

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holachica
holachicaLv4holachica

AND also... the MWJ won't stop mentioning how he himself is a genius cos he invented the reverse meridian something cultivation technique. I MEAN. WE KNOW. WE REALIZED AFTER THE FIRST COUPLE TIMES YOU SAID IT. NO NEED TO KEEP MENTIONING IT like 120847820 times. Gosh. Arrogant asf. Also.. yeah... so so so many plotholes and confusions...

Okami
OkamiLv6Okami

I feel that this story would seem better if you had a shorter attention span and not a finite dedication to the particulars (Such as resolution and filling the plot holes). Plus the protagonist was unrealtable and was covered in plot armor so thick that nuclear weapons couldn't touch him much less an antagonist. 😆 @holachica: This is what authors do to pad their word count and its irritating. đŸ˜