Review Detail of Ulupong_Tan in Immortal Mortal

Upon reading further i have realized that the MC became a bit gutsy but the story was all over the place. Its bad enough that the characters were not properly described along with the world, now they introduce an arc on top of an arc. I mean, that would be tolerable if it was the issue but no. The cultivation of the Enemy is always leaps and bounds ahead of the MC, the moment the MC gains a good cultivation a new enemy appears with a cultivation that has a very big disparity with the MC. It might look entertaining on Newb readers but for me, a cultivation enthusiast reader, this novel is nothing but trashy. I applaud the author for trying but you should first read other cultivation novels so that you know the process. Give the MC a time to grow and show its growth before introducing another problem not dumping it one after the other.